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It's All Relative 22

Jan 10, 2010 11:51

Author: hawkbehere (hawkbehere2@yahoo.com)
Rated PG
Summary: The typical bore and snore.

A/N: Rosemary would kick me for calling her a beta but I love and thank her for about 10 million reasons that are so manifestly obvious that the least of them is giving this the once-over twice. All mistakes are mine. Apologies for the massive delay. If you knew ( Read more... )

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radak January 10 2010, 18:58:15 UTC

Oh, thank you for the update!!! It is wonderful!

hawkbehere January 11 2010, 01:16:57 UTC

My lovely Radak. I'm glad you enjoyed it. More tomorrow, dear.

radak January 11 2010, 04:24:55 UTC

I am looking forward to it!

jintymac January 10 2010, 19:01:17 UTC

I've missed this story so much and am ecstatic that you're updating again :D

I hope everything is going better for you in RL and can't wait to read more of your amazing writing ;-)

hawkbehere January 11 2010, 01:20:47 UTC

Ah, my fair Jinty. Thanks for reading, You'll get more writing tomorrow, amazing (?) or not. It may just be--maybe not amazing but I think you'll like tomorrow's installment.

Thank you, dear, for always supporting me.

wilmarth13 January 10 2010, 19:14:04 UTC

Hey you! It's great to see that you're back...and with an update!! I was quite obviously excited to see an update and it most definitely lives up to the hawk gold standard. But I have to say, Miranda is kinda scary. Awesome and fierce and very, very scary. Yet again you portray the characters with complete believability and eerily true to their characterizations from the movie.

I can't wait to see what else you have for us. When you get a chance let me know what is going on with you.

Jess

hawkbehere January 11 2010, 01:22:14 UTC

Jess.

Thank you, honey. Let's catch up on IM. I miss you and thank you for reading.

chamilt6 January 10 2010, 20:05:01 UTC

Bravo! Wonderful update.

hawkbehere January 11 2010, 01:22:41 UTC

Thanks for reading and for taking the time to write.

law_nerd January 10 2010, 20:05:08 UTC

When I say there are no words sufficient to express the extent of jubillation inspired by this update, please trust that I honestly mean nothing in Roget's (or thesaurus.com for that matter) comes close to capturing exactly how thrilled I am.

Every time Sam interjects, I like him more. Which, I think, is part of the awesomeness that is your writing. You've created interesting and nuanced characters, but instead of letting the story coast to an end you keep showing the complexity and integrity of each individual with perfect scenes, including: Miranda's "intentions"; the proposal; Cassidy&Caroline at breakfast; Roy and Mary.

Glad that whatever roadblocks life was throwing at you have receded, and hope the 2010 is an all round better year.

hawkbehere January 11 2010, 01:34:29 UTC

Well, you.

Roget? Books describing words are just more words, aren't they? That only means, to me, that you're too kind. I'm pleased that you enjoyed the chapter. More tomorrow.

I'm glad that you enjoy the characters I'm creating. I want them all to be real. I hope they are. No character should be less than the 'stars' in the firmament of a story. I do want Roy and Mary to be as real as Andy or Miranda.

Thank you for reading.