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It's All Relative 23

Jan 12, 2010 07:01

It’s All Relative 23
Author: hawkbehere (hawkbehere2@yahoo.com)
Rated PG
Summary: A little Runway. A tiny chapter…

A/N Massive thanks and love to Rosemary for the once over. She’s better than I deserve. English women rule! All mistakes are mine, which is sort of the story of my life, come to think of it. As always, love to Z, my darling Martha and to ( Read more... )

rating: pg, author: hawkbehere, all: fiction

Comments 16

law_nerd January 12 2010, 12:30:47 UTC

Awesome.

The whole Runway section, especially Miranda not being quite able to call Andy 'Emily', and the dialogue between Nigel and Miranda, then Andy and Miranda, was perfect.

"Whipped?" as much as someone like Miranda could be... and it's lovely to see.

Thanks!

hawkbehere January 12 2010, 21:04:10 UTC

Aw, L_N. Thanks for reading. I always love knowing you're on the case.

kdsusa3 January 12 2010, 13:32:35 UTC

Absolutely wonderful. I love your characterizations. They are awesome. Great chapter.

hawkbehere January 12 2010, 21:05:02 UTC

Hi, you!

Thanks for reading, lovely leaf. I never feel quite settled 'til I hear from you.

xenasgab January 12 2010, 16:07:23 UTC

Another update just falls into my lap!
Love Nigel, never enough of him, lol~!
Love his attitude with Miranda and Andy.

hawkbehere January 12 2010, 21:06:15 UTC

Hi, X. I'll throw 'em in your lap until it's done.

Thanks so much for reading.

memorysdream January 12 2010, 16:54:46 UTC

Thank you for a wonderful chapter!

I especially liked how Andy convinces Miranda to give the twins chores.

hawkbehere January 12 2010, 21:07:06 UTC

I always thought those kids needed chores. I'm glad you agree.

Thanks for reading and for taking the time to comment.

mayireadtoday January 12 2010, 17:08:19 UTC

I love the Miranda-Andy back and forth about the picture/model.

Magdalena praying to God about her family -- so interesting, so heart-warming, so heart-breaking.

TRUE! "Run through the Rolodex in your mind and tell me just how many of your fabulously wealthy friends have grown kids who are worth a shit."

Although, personally I suck at cleaning the kitchen and bathroom and wish I had someone to do it for me.

hawkbehere January 12 2010, 21:09:11 UTC

I want someone to clean up after me too. I've grown up enough to put the cap on the toothpaste but that's about it. Thanks for reading, dear. I'm so grateful you enjoyed it.