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It's All Relative 25

Jan 15, 2010 06:44

It’s All Relative 25
Author: hawkbehere (hawkbehere2@yahoo.com)
Rated PG
Summary: More par-tay.

A/N: My enduring love to Rosemary for the once over. All mistakes are mine. Love to Z and to Martha as well.
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radak January 15 2010, 12:09:54 UTC

It's great as usual! I love how you picture Serena. She is great. And the last line is right to the point!

hawkbehere January 15 2010, 13:28:28 UTC

My dear Radak! I'm so happy you enjoyed it. Thanks. I like Serena, too. I think it shows...

radak January 15 2010, 13:33:03 UTC

indeed!

jintymac January 15 2010, 12:16:23 UTC

That last line was absolutely priceless ;-)

What a volleyball game lol! I loved all of the little pockets of commentary from everyone at the party and I can't wait to read the next installment as usual :D

hawkbehere January 15 2010, 13:29:26 UTC

Ah, my Jinty. Thanks, dear. I'm glad you liked it. Nothing like a faceplant while playing a game to liven a party, I'm thinking. Thanks for reading.

raventat January 15 2010, 12:24:03 UTC

Very nice. I spent the last two days catching up because I found I just couldn't follow chapter 23. So glad I did!

hawkbehere January 15 2010, 13:30:23 UTC

Thanks for keeping with it. I always love hearing from you. I appreciate your reading.

take_itback January 15 2010, 12:31:00 UTC

This story keeps me so entranced. Don't think I haven't been gobbling up every update. This is amazing. I love the Serena/Miranda dynamic. It's hard to picture Miranda playing volleyball, but fun all the same. You managed to keep her close to Miranda without being the ice queen, you know what i mean? She's Family!Miranda. :)
Love the sweatshirt/robe mentions. Maybe they should have a fic to themselves? :D lmao. jk.
Love you darlin!
-Kay.

hawkbehere January 15 2010, 13:32:13 UTC

Hello, stranger! (laughing). So glad to hear from you. Thanks for reading, dear. Yes, I think the sweatshirt and robe should ride off into the sunset together, too. Love ya right back!

carinjo January 15 2010, 12:32:46 UTC

serena is fantastic. her comments and wit and her insight. lovely stuff

hawkbehere January 15 2010, 13:33:34 UTC

Hi, carinjo--I have a little crush on anyone who puts Miranda in her place so, because I'm the writer and all that, I got to do it for myself! Good times! I'm so grateful you enjoyed it.