It's All Relative 26

Jan 16, 2010 06:47

It’s All Relative 26
Author: hawkbehere (hawkbehere2@yahoo.com)
Rated PG
Summary: The typical snore-fest, plus a couple of essays so bring your coffee or beverage of choice. Getting pleasantly closer to the end, as I’m sure anyone reading couldn’t help but cheer happily. There are references Serena makes to things she’s said earlier in this fic. ( Read more... )

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jintymac January 16 2010, 12:17:13 UTC
I have no words to describe how awesome this chapter was!

My mind is completely boggled and amazed at the articles you've written and the description of that Runway cover photograph :D

I can just imagine the impact something like this would have on everyone who saw and read it (as I'm feeling that way right now) and those last few lines of Serena's were absolutely perfect ;-)

Can't wait to see how everyone else in this story reacts to all of this!

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hawkbehere January 16 2010, 14:25:50 UTC
My fair Jintymac. I'm so very happy you enjoyed it. I'm especially pleased you enjoyed Miranda and Serena's contributions, as I worked on them a bit. I'm always so grateful you continue to read.

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akasarahsmom January 16 2010, 13:24:34 UTC
Oh my God...

That was just awesome. I don't know how you do that, but every chapter of this story makes me love Miranda just a little more.

And Serena? Just, wow.

Thank you

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hawkbehere January 16 2010, 14:27:16 UTC
Thanks, Aka. Very kind of you. I've actually never necessarily meant to make Miranda lovable but there it goes. Thank you for reading.

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akasarahsmom January 16 2010, 14:29:00 UTC
Honestly, I'm not sure Miranda is 'lovable' in the traditional sense of the word, but I do love her. LOL Ya know?

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hawkbehere January 16 2010, 14:36:10 UTC
Gotcha! She's...uh...love-worthy. Not necessarily lovable. Good call, aka. You're right.

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kdsusa3 January 16 2010, 13:37:12 UTC
I can't tell you how much I love your characters. There is nothing snore worthy about you or your work darlin'. I absolutely adore this story and this chapter was beautiful. Thank you.

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hawkbehere January 16 2010, 14:28:09 UTC
Thank you kd. As I've always said, a chapter doesn't really exist for me until I hear from you. I'm so happy you enjoyed it.

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merigibe January 16 2010, 13:40:20 UTC
you keep outdoing yourself with every chapter!! as you were describing the cover i was just imagining iot in my mind!! you are fantastic!! i am sooo sad that this story will be ending soon!!! but i must say that it is my absolute favourite that i have read about DWP!!!

everything i say about you has already been said but i'll say it again anyway!!

you effing rock!!!

besos desde madrid

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hawkbehere January 16 2010, 14:29:09 UTC
You're entirely too kind--but I'll enjoy it anyway (laughing). Thanks, dear, for reading.

Besos right back atcha!

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ravenbull January 16 2010, 14:14:00 UTC
When most writers would have made do with egocentric...I'll miss your words when this is through.

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hawkbehere January 16 2010, 14:34:36 UTC
Laughing out loud! I'm about the least egocentric writer on planet Earth. I know I can just barely make my verb tenses work. A little. I'm so thankful you've befriended me, continue to read and for your comments.

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ravenbull January 17 2010, 08:49:45 UTC
You are aware I was referring to your word usage-not you, yes?
When most writers...you had to double down with solipsistic. Solipsistic. I'm a little verklempt.

Long day. Forgive me if I misunderstood your reply.

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hawkbehere January 17 2010, 11:43:48 UTC
No--actually, I did think you were talking about me. But it didn't offend me (at all!)--it made me laugh. And now it's making me laugh harder because it suggests somebody here is a little solipsistic herself. That'd be me! You always charm me with your comments. Thanks!

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