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It's All Relative 27

Jan 23, 2010 13:54

It’s All Relative 27
Author: hawkbehere (hawkbehere2@yahoo.com)
Rated: PG
Summary: Runway! And domesticity! Oh my!

A/N: Love and a thank God for Rosemary, both for the once over and encouragement. All mistakes are mine, an existential problem I discovered in childhood. A tip of me ‘at to xenavirgin and law_nerd and Jess. And as always, a loving howdy ( Read more... )

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punky_96 January 24 2010, 06:12:32 UTC

That was great. I love how you handled the conflict between loving the cover/billboard and acknowledging the upset that it also caused. I really loved the interactions between Miranda and Andy in this. Their not-fight, lovemaking, and the talk afterward were amazing. The twins are in such a strange changing place and I really feel for them.

Sad to see the chapter numbers, but thrilled to read more. Thanks.

hawkbehere January 24 2010, 14:19:51 UTC

Thank you, punky.

I'm really pleased you enjoyed the conversations you mentioned. Actually, all of the conversations in this chapter gave me pause, except with Miranda and Irv. Go figure!

I appreciate your reading.

radak January 24 2010, 07:51:53 UTC

it was good to see an update. Great chapter. I like Irv's idea. It was fun. And amusing. And I can't wait for the next chapter.

hawkbehere January 24 2010, 14:21:03 UTC

Radak! I'm glad you enjoyed it. New chapter soon.

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hawkbehere January 24 2010, 16:26:44 UTC

I only wrote that billboard because I'd love to see it.

I think Miranda would scare every human to death as a PR agent. I thank you for reading and for commenting. I eagerly await the next installment, as well. Wait...(ducking) here comes the first paragraph!

Thanks.

dhorny January 24 2010, 15:59:03 UTC

oohh i think i may just be able to imagine Serena and Miranda that big, more chapters pretty please

hawkbehere January 24 2010, 16:27:43 UTC

They are that big...both of them.

You'll have another chapter soon. Thank you for reading, d.

jintymac January 24 2010, 16:52:52 UTC

Another brilliant update and although it saddens me to see that the end is in sight I must admit that I'm looking forward to seeing where you take everything :D

Irv is a sneaky bastard but I loved everyone's reactions to the massive electronic billboard even if it freaked out poor Serena. Miranda was amazing with her when they had their little 'chat' so I'm glad things worked out ;-)

As usual I'll be eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

hawkbehere January 25 2010, 11:10:57 UTC

Jinty!

Miranda pokes Irv in the eye so often I thought it was about time he got his back. Thanks for continuing to read and I do hope you enjoy the port the good ship IAR will finally reach.