Break in the Case

Aug 09, 2010 18:57

Break in the Case
Law and Order: SVU
Alex/Olivia
Rated G

A/N: I take a short break from the magnum opus and my two other rapidly growing stories to send out a quick happy birthday to my bud wilmarth13. Love ya J.

All mistakes are mine. I’ve got it like that.
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7tree_hugger August 15 2010, 17:55:06 UTC
Wow. Pleased my cute button and my brain. This was amazing. Loved the cleverness. Well done. I add my voice to those who would be willing to accept more should any more plot bunnies turn up.

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law_nerd August 16 2010, 19:50:34 UTC
Hey Hawk, A conversation elsewhere on the topic of cats left me with a strong urge to re-read some early IAR (the lovely and eminently satisfying Chapter 7), and *this* came as a happy surprise. Awesome vignette: perfect as a self-contained one-off story, equally perfect -- should time and inspiration take you there -- as a preface to more.

I've been thinking, recently, about taking chances. It seems part of being 'grown up' may be the understanding that relationships bloom only where the people involved continually take chances in trusting bits of their selves to each other. It's a risky proposition -- though infinitely rewarding when it works. From that perspective, interesting to see how your Alex and Olivia handle their first leaps of trust: Alex needing the plausible deniability granted by intoxication but willing to speak her piece, while Olivia prefers clarity and the sober light of morning but protects herself with the distance of leaving a note. The balance suits their characters.

Thank you for this, and much else.

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hawkbehere August 21 2010, 12:55:26 UTC
Why thank you--I actually had to go back and read IAR Chapter 7 to find out what you were talking about. I do reread them occasionally to maintain whatever semblance of continuity exists in IAR but I don't remember them as chapters anymore--rather more like "oh yeah, that blob of writing I did back when Jimmy Carter was in office ( ... )

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hawkbehere August 28 2010, 22:51:48 UTC
Thanks for reading. I do appreciate it.

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