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hawkbehere

It’s All Relative 30

Sep 04, 2010 17:28

Author: hawkbehere (hawkbehere2@yahoo.com)
Rated: G, dammit! Oh look. Now it’s PG. No seriously? PG.
Disclaimer: The really super-attractive, interesting characters in this story? They’re not mine. No copyright infringement intended.

A/N: Again with a micro-micro-burst. A bit kid-oriented and domestic. Sorry.

All mistakes are mine. Love and thanks to ( Read more... )

Comments 40

punky_96 September 5 2010, 03:32:51 UTC

Excellent!

hawkbehere September 5 2010, 12:53:22 UTC

As are you! Thanks punky.

bontivia September 5 2010, 06:12:31 UTC

love the new update. You made my weekend two updates in two days - fabulous!

hawkbehere September 5 2010, 12:54:12 UTC

Really? Cool! I wish I could make my weekend. Rushing off to try....

Thank you for reading.

seelyfey September 5 2010, 07:28:26 UTC

I can't quite express just how much I liked this: "“Why not? I am important, no?”"

It says so much about their dynamic and it very neatly puts Miranda's high and mightyness back in its place without it becoming an issue.

And of course, the twins and Andy's dynamic was lovely as well. Its nice to see Caroline being a brat and Andy knowing just how to handle it. The tacit understanding beneath the jibes was sweet and very realistic. Well done!

hawkbehere September 5 2010, 12:58:51 UTC

Hi, seelyfey. Thanks for commenting. It seems like it's only been hours (laughing). Seriously? Thank you so much for reading. That's a hazard of updating too quickly (not something I, admittedly, know anything about). Readers should by all rights be saying "Oh for the love of the crows--not her again..."

But no. You're kind. And write. Which I very much appreciate.

I'm so happy you liked it.

radak September 5 2010, 12:20:32 UTC

perfect indeed!

hawkbehere September 5 2010, 12:59:47 UTC

Thank you Radak. You change your icon, R, but I'd recognize you anywhere!

I'm always so happy to know you're still reading.

IAR - 30 icequeen1955 September 5 2010, 14:50:07 UTC

Ditto, 2 in 2 days and the fun of the Wanda "handling" Miranda was wonderful. Caroline is so much like her mother and Carlo "concrete on the outside, jello on the inside". God help the world when she grows up. Thanks again for the characters and joy this story has brought.

Re: IAR - 30 hawkbehere September 5 2010, 16:24:36 UTC

Speaking of handling? Caroline is going to be a handful. You'll see.

Thank you very much for reading.I'm so happy you're enjoying it.