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It’s All Relative 32

Sep 23, 2010 18:11

It’s All Relative 32
Author: hawkbehere (hawkbehere2@yahoo.com)
Rated: PG, for language.
Disclaimer: The majority of these characters are not mine. No copyright infringement intended.

A/N: Another micro-burst. All mistakes are mine. All my love and thanks to Rosemary for reading first. Love to Anne, Jessica, law_nerd, xenavirgin and Martha.

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Comments 34

worst_liar_ever September 23 2010, 22:27:09 UTC

yay! I loved it. It was a bit scary finding out how serious miranda's injury is though. I like esme.

hawkbehere September 23 2010, 23:39:44 UTC

Thank you. I like Esme. But I can't write more of her (putting down my keyboard). I so appreciate your reading.

kdsusa3 September 23 2010, 22:30:20 UTC

AWESOME!!!! You just made my day. Seriously. Your characters are great, and I loved the little insight to Dr. Allen. One of my favorites, she is. Wow. Tired and excited=Yoda speak. Keep up the awesomeness darlin'.

hawkbehere September 23 2010, 23:46:54 UTC

My leaf! Thank you. I never, ever tire of hearing from you and I'm so happy you enjoyed it.

jintymac September 23 2010, 22:40:04 UTC

Thanks as always for another amazing update, you know I always look forward to them ;-)

Miranda's injury is more terrible than I thought but of course she'd die before letting anyone know that. Esme is a great character, I really liked that bit of background you gave her with Dr Allen. Looking forward to the next chapter!

hawkbehere September 24 2010, 00:19:41 UTC

The fair jinty! Thank you so much for continuing to read. I always look forward to you. I'm grateful that you enjoyed it.

mayireadtoday September 23 2010, 22:45:26 UTC

I don't understand the medical part. Why is a shot in the arm a life-threatening injury and more serious than a shot to the stomach?

hawkbehere September 24 2010, 12:45:04 UTC

Hi, you. Thanks for reading ( ... )

mayireadtoday September 24 2010, 16:07:50 UTC

Thanks so much for explaining.

xenavirgin September 23 2010, 22:45:29 UTC

Like oh wow!! I'll admit TLW has some serious issues with fluid sexuality linked to love... but this was truly well done. Damn you introducing another most excellent sub character.

I'm gonna start a petition for you to write a fic (original and therefore lucrative, heheeh) about the back story you just did!!!

Do I hear a second for the motion??? :-) :-) :-) :-)

Lovely little pressie this before I head to the land of Nod.

hawkbehere September 24 2010, 13:25:27 UTC

Oh, if I only had time to write a tome about Dr. Allen and Esme. I'm so happy you liked it. I'll PM you about the rest!

Thank you XV. As always, much love to you and TLW...