The Girl From Another Planet

[hawkbehere]

The Girl from Another Planet
Fandom: Rizzoli/Isles
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Don’t own a thing. Nearly literally.

A/N: This is a one shot. One shots hit me at odd times and they’re usually like two-bite brownies to write so I write ‘em when they appear. This is, actually, now that I look at it? Really long for two-bites. Let's call it three. This is for

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[anthro06]

This!! Loved it! I can absolutely see Maura retreating like this and Jane not knowing how to fix it and screwing things up even more than before. Perfect!

And I do so love Korsak!

Korsak watched, listened and when Maura had left the room said, “Hey, Rizzoli?”

“Yeah, Korsak?”

“You and I mean YOU obviously broke our M.E. Go fix her. Now.”

And Frost! Go Barry!

“Wow,” He shook his head again, “No lie about the brick thing. She likes you-as in likes you?”

He watched Jane’s face change as she absorbed this. “She likes me likes me?”

He couldn’t help it. He rolled his eyes, “Yes. Work from that assumption.”

But this part was my fav:

Maura almost smiled as she perused Jane’s face. “Your vocal tonality and facial symmetry suggest you’re telling the truth.”

“What else does my face tell you?”

Maura gazed at her for a few moments, “I think you want to kiss me.”

*happy sigh* Thanks for sharing!

[hawkbehere]

Why thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Secret?

It's always a happy sigh when someone likes what you've written.

[wilmarth13]

I don't say this lightly....even BETTER than a brownie, less fat too! Damn, woman, you sure know how to put a person through the emotional wringer...and I don't just mean Jane. I am super impressed. Also? I loved the line about loving a woman being different, kinda reminded me of something. hmmmm. Loved, loved, loved Jane's name choice for her tortoise.

Jess

[hawkbehere]

I know you don't, sweetheart. We fight over virtual brownies constantly. As always, I appreciate your reading. And I thought you might like Small Mouth Bass.

Thank you, Jess.

[snuffnyc]

Oh gosh. This is really, really, REALLY good. The characterizations are so beyond right, they've become their own thing. They're spectacularly vivid, and fucking FUN.

I understand the one-shot hits you like a brick to the face (or ICBM, hello, great random reference) but if the mood ever strikes you again, I'll be first in line.

Fantastic.

[hawkbehere]

Thank you. I trend toward the completely random--in life as well. I'm so happy you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment.

[ml_spikie]

Whoa. That was awesome. You made me cry. Thank goodness it worked out. I was so devastated at the way Jane "broke" Maura. I totally loved the way Frost helped her and Korsak being in it too. I hope to see more writing from you. Very, very well done.

[hawkbehere]

I enjoyed throwing the guys in there. I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for reading.

[hawkbehere]

Thank you for reading!