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hawkbehere

It's All Relative 35-B

Nov 05, 2011 17:23

It’s All Relative 35-B
Author: hawkbehere (hawkbehere@yahoo.com)
Rated: PG

A/N: If you’ve forgotten who Peter Sagong is, he’s Miranda and Andy’s FBI friend.

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hawkbehere November 7 2011, 09:26:52 UTC

Why thank you. I’m very sorry you’ve had to slog through rereading to pass the time (smiling). I’ll get you a trip to Vermont as soon as I can. As I mentioned above, Isabelle’s been in the wings for a while but she showed up this time and they happened to have a lot to say to each other. I’m glad you found it interesting.

As for the word use, if you think I could transcribe your comment into any language but my own, you’d be mistaken.YOU'RE the one with the good vocabulary.

Much love back atcha. Thank you again for reading and for writing.

tanama31 November 5 2011, 22:30:55 UTC

i love this chapter. miranda really thought she was going to keep the wedding trip a secret nice to see her tried lol. it was an enjoyment to read and i look forward to reading more.

hawkbehere November 7 2011, 09:27:51 UTC

Hi, tanama. I'm happy you enjoyed it. Working on more soon. Thanks for reading.

whitelder November 5 2011, 23:43:20 UTC

Had me teary there Hawk! But I, like mayireadtoday hope she gets closure soon!...and the stroppy camel...rofl

hawkbehere November 7 2011, 09:33:51 UTC

Why hello, whitelder. It's always so nice to hear from you. I think Miranda and Isabelle are getting the kind of closure they can tolerate. I find that people who don't 'do' vulnerability tend to feel better sharing the stoic version of that emotion with others more like them.

I've known people who've lived with camels in their daily lives. Evidently they're always stroppy, dyed and posing for photo shoots or not.

Thanks so much for continuing to read..

xenavirgin November 6 2011, 00:49:11 UTC

Gulp. And wonderfully done. Loved the quirky humour of the first half, and appropriately moved by the intensity of the second half.

Much, much happiness and gratitude for the continuation.

XV

nancyh59 November 6 2011, 01:01:21 UTC

Please tell us it won't be too long till the next update!

medora_macd November 6 2011, 01:55:59 UTC

Intense and insightful and full of lovely surprises...May your muse continue to inspire you. This is a story with real power. Thanks so much for sharing your time and talents with us.

hawkbehere November 7 2011, 09:39:16 UTC

I'm happy you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading--and for commenting.