Critiques appreciated.

[hawthorne]

Slippin' Out

(So what's wrong?)

I asked where he was today
'cause he wasn't at school, and he started
slippin' out like I don't
need
to check in with
you
all the time
an' wait for you after every class an'
blah blah blah.

(Slippin'?)

Flippin'.

(He said that?)

Well kinda. So he was slippin' away,
right? Then he turned around an' started sayin'
I know we aren't gonna get back together
and shit and
I'm like
oh,
and you know fucking
everything?

(Your dealer?)

No, my ex.
My dealer just wants to fuck,
which I'm totally cool with.