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[hawttscottsman]

OK, HERE WE GO, THIS IS WHAT I WANT, I WANT ANYONE READING MY LJ TO CRITICISE MY POETRY. I WANT TO GET BETTER, AND IF YOU COMMENT I MAY EVEN WRITE POETRY THAT YOU LIKE. SO MAKE CRITICAL POSTS OF MY POETRY!

(although try to avoid hurting my delicate feelings in the process)

Comments

[hulkhoodie]

Write one about a penguin. Or a panda. I'm trying to give you advice without hurting your feelings. Is it working?

[hawttscottsman]

I'd rather have you point out the specific bad points in my poems, but I will definitely try to write one about a penguin or a panda.