Fic: In My Sky at Twilight

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Title: In My Sky at Twilight
Author: snow_blossoms
Characters and pairings: Remus/Sirius (sort of) and Remus/Tonks (if you squint)
Rating and warnings, if any: PG
Prompt, if any: Remus grieving Sirius by cookiedough
Summary: Remus dealing with the aftermath of Sirius' death. Title from Pablo Neruda's poem of the same name.

Comments

[rotaryphones]

How beautiful and sad. I particularly liked Remus's description of himself, poor thing.

[yndigot]

Like falling in love. With your best friend. Turned traitor. Turned not traitor. Turned lover. Turned - dead.

I love that line. Knife-to-the-heart excellent.

[gryffindorj]

Lovely. Lovely and heartbreaking! I love the second paragraph. The rhythm of it and exactly how perfect the words are. The grief is so strong in this, I feel achy and sad. Stunning job!

[cherie_morte]

D: This was gorgeous, so so so real. Oh man, the pain--it's exactly how I think things would have gone for Remus, and that made it all the more hurty. These things especially stuck oout for me:

These days Tonks wanders in and out his life like a traveling salesman.

^^ That's just a really great simile.

And the last line, of course, even though it was like a knife to the heart. Great ficlet!