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Grey Cats in the Dark

Apr 09, 2005 18:56

Title: Grey Cats in the Dark
Author: seeker brenantrimChallenge and number: 18. Mistaken identity--both supposed to meet someone in a dark room and things progress before they realize ( Read more... )

Comments 48

somewhatdeluded April 10 2005, 02:18:46 UTC

I laughed so hard I ended up spitting tea all over my shirt, and my laptop, and my dog, who was very indignant about the whole incident.

Very nicely done.

brenantrim April 11 2005, 19:08:35 UTC

Thank you kindly! I hope your dog has since forgiven you...

sciencegeek April 10 2005, 02:26:10 UTC

Aw, this was cute! The writing style reminds me of someone but for the life of me I can't remember! Well done though!

brenantrim April 11 2005, 19:10:14 UTC

Thankyou very much! Perhaps you've read my stuff before sometime in the past twelve years and can't place it? I do that quite often. Sometimes even with my own stories.

werewindle April 10 2005, 03:08:49 UTC

I loved this. One of my favorites so far I think. ^__^ Very, very hot.

brenantrim April 11 2005, 19:10:52 UTC

It's Draco's fault! Harry's doing his best, but Draco sizzles when he breathes. Thank you!

teot April 10 2005, 03:52:54 UTC

I love this cliche! And you did it very well -- I very much enjoyed it.

brenantrim April 11 2005, 19:11:29 UTC

Thank you! I love reworking cliches. Very fun to play with!

drusillas_rain April 10 2005, 05:56:05 UTC

eeeee - loved this!

brenantrim April 11 2005, 19:12:05 UTC

Thank you! I love your icon.