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Fic: Look Again (PG13)

Oct 04, 2008 14:59

Author: tiger_flame
Title: Look Again
Pairing(s): Draco/Harry, Remus/Sirius, slight Remus/Severus and Lily/James
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Without Voldemort to take away the things most special to him, Harry Potter is just a normal boy. Until his godfather is attacked and sent into a coma. Now Harry must figure out a way to keep Sirius’ money out of the Malfoy’ ( Read more... )

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Comments 12

reicheruchan October 4 2008, 15:22:01 UTC

i love it... draco is so kind and understanding!

jamie2109 October 5 2008, 02:12:04 UTC

There were several things I liked about this story. I loved that even though James and Lily were alive, they didn't actually have a good relationship with Harry. I liked that Sirius and Remus were together, too, and it was interesting to see that in a non-Voldy driven world that Narcissa was the evil one. I also really liked how Draco was very protective of Harry and even though I generally don't like Harry being portrayed as weak and ineffectual, your Harry was fairly sweet. I liked how you described that his memory had holes in it. Well done. The Marauders all being back together was terrific as well ( ... )

phoenixacid October 5 2008, 05:24:48 UTC

It was definitely interesting to read about a world without Voldemort, and to see all the differences and similarities between this world and the actual one. I enjoyed how protective Draco is towards Harry, and how cute Sirius and Remus are together. However, I do agree with jamie2109 that there are quite a few jarring plot holes, and I thought the numerous parentheses at the start detracts one from the storyline as well. Perhaps you just need more time to work out the kinks with a beta.

tomatoe18 October 6 2008, 02:57:09 UTC

I love the way Draco and Harry's relationship developed. The part where Draco told Harry about being inherited was very touching; the subsequent kiss after that revelation felt very much like Draco choosing Harry and their love over material wealth, which is romantic. I think the most beautiful part of the whole thing was the end, with Harry's hopeful internal monologue.

That said, I also wished there was some closure, particularly over how the Malfoys are punished, because I think they should be punished. I also would like to know what happens to Remus. I hope the additions include these as well, but if not, at least they answered the plot holes that the reviewers before me mentioned.

Nonetheless, it was an interesting read. A world without Voldemort and Harry 's life is still difficult. What a jarring notion. This is one I'll be pondering over and over.

pervyunitwins October 6 2008, 06:41:13 UTC

I very much enjoyed reading this. I enjoyed how Harry and Draco's story developed. Draco was just so sweet and still Draco, mostly. I liked the idea of everything not happening on the Voldemort front, but it was a bit sad that things still ended up the way they did with Harry's family. And the ending was ever so sweet.