Team AU: 20. Close your eyes and think of Hogwarts.

Apr 06, 2009 14:21

Title: primum mobile, or ten forgotten things
Team: AU, baby!
Author: kirinin
Prompt: 20. Close your eyes and think of Hogwarts.
Wordcount: just over 4,000
Rating: PG
Warnings: None, really.
Summary: The truth: logic isn't in the lump in his throat, in his stuttering pulse. He needs the certainty of his name on someone else's lips, which means he needs ( Read more... )

team au, prompt: 20. close your eyes, pg, fic, round ii

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scarlet_malfoy April 7 2009, 00:29:46 UTC
This was just so ethereal... I absolutely loved the mood it created, and I literally got chills from it... and so sad. =( Loved this!

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kirinin April 7 2009, 02:08:26 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the atmosphere the story created. :)

-K

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kirinin April 7 2009, 02:21:58 UTC
"...but maybe they are all right without it." >D Thank you! I hope they will be.

-K

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tiger_iris April 7 2009, 09:19:29 UTC
Excellent. I loved this fic a lot, although I found it really disturbing. Wonderful use of the prompt, even though it's so sad in a way.

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kirinin April 7 2009, 10:34:35 UTC
Thanks, tiger_iris! I'm glad you liked the fic. I have to admit I couldn't make the story end in complete despair... so I have to believe that the characters still have a future together. Still I understand why you'd call this a sad fic. :(

Thanks again for reading and reviewing,

-K

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irisqi April 7 2009, 09:46:49 UTC
The thing I loved most about this story was the way that everything that kept Harry and Draco apart- the war, blood purity, friends- just disappeared, and almost logically and inevitably they came together. Very, very powerful.

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kirinin April 7 2009, 10:37:53 UTC
Absolutely. Thank you so much for your review! Glad you enjoyed the fic. :)

-K

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kirinin April 7 2009, 13:38:58 UTC
Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed the fic. :)

-K

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