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Team EWE: 18. "This one time, at Hogwarts..."

Apr 15, 2009 14:35

Title: Our Story To Tell
Team: EWE!
Author: supergreak
Prompt: 18. "This one time, at Hogwarts..."
Wordcount: 3,613
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Some foul language, innuendo, past violence, fluff.
Summary: Every Hogwarts graduate knows that a good story always starts with "This one time, at Hogwarts..."
Author's Note: Thanks to abusing_sarcasm for beta reading!

( Our Story To Tell )

pg-13, fic, team ewe, prompt: 18. this one time at hogwarts, round ii

Comments 52

smirking_muse April 15 2009, 12:20:40 UTC

I absolutely loved this! I adored the way this began with an interview- and the banter between the three of them at the start. It was quite clever and very cute! You also have a fabulous way to have them get together (and I bet the rumours really were flying after that incident! Haha). And of course Ron would believe it was all a prank- I could just see his face when he found out; I bet it was hilarious. Also, I want to see the Harry Potter calendar!!

Plus, the story Draco told to their son was priceless! It was such a perfect telling of adoption (and I bet their family was just too good looking for the other little kids to handle). I laughed out loud at Neville's comment about destroying furniture. The thing about the adoption spell is quite clever (I never would have thought of that)- that must make their kids even better!

The stories were very funny and clever, and I love that we were able to glimpse into their long and happy lives together. Very well done!

supergreak April 15 2009, 18:33:06 UTC

Thanks! I want the calendar, too.

I'm glad the adoption thing worked. Too right, they were too good looking.

nicevenn April 15 2009, 12:49:38 UTC

Loved it!

supergreak April 15 2009, 18:33:18 UTC

Thanks!

jamie2109 April 15 2009, 13:07:56 UTC

I quite enjoyed this. Their kids were cute and it was nice to see Jack getting into trouble. A glimpse of their lives together was fun to see, too. Thanks for the read. Good job for the team. had that slightly manic tone to it that seems to come with saying the prompt.

supergreak April 15 2009, 18:34:06 UTC

I'm glad I captured the tone. Thanks for reviewing!

leochi April 15 2009, 13:19:43 UTC

What a truly charming story! It made me smile and laugh quite a number of times. :D

supergreak April 15 2009, 18:40:18 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad I made you smile.

maggie2mw April 15 2009, 13:54:35 UTC

Fluff alert!!

Haha, nice story to read at end of a tiring day, wonderful

supergreak April 23 2009, 08:41:34 UTC

Yep! 100% smiles guaranteed, best taken with chocolate after a hard day's work. Thanks for reading!