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Mar 13, 2014 20:08

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Re: mirror -- FILL traintracks March 15 2014, 00:45:34 UTC
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Rating: R
Words: 100
Content: handjob \o/

"Look at how you weep for it," Harry whispered, and Draco sagged back against his body. "Keep your eyes open," he admonished when Draco's lashes fluttered.

Harry's rough palm cradled Draco's cock, his fingers moving gentle over the head with every slow tug. Draco's trousers were barely shoved down, his shirt drawn up so that they both could watch the desperate breaths he took.

Harry reached forward and wiped the shower steam off the mirror again, and with the next sure squeeze of Harry's fist, Draco found Harry's sharp gaze in their reflection and came all over the slick glass.

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Re: mirror -- FILL lokifan March 15 2014, 01:15:26 UTC
UNF. This is gorgeous.

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Re: mirror -- FILL traintracks March 15 2014, 01:36:19 UTC
Thank you!! :-D

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Re: mirror -- FILL mothlights March 15 2014, 01:18:19 UTC
It's a wonder Draco can see anything in that mirror, despite Harry's efforts at wiping it off, because that's steamy. Thanks for that bit of hotness!

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Re: mirror -- FILL traintracks March 15 2014, 01:36:52 UTC
Thank YOU for reading it! :-)

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Re: mirror amorette March 15 2014, 02:00:26 UTC
!!!!!!!!!!

Super hot, like steaming! Like the shower! LOL God the dirty talk is great.

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Re: mirror traintracks March 15 2014, 02:22:55 UTC
Awww, thank you! :-D

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Re: mirror -- FILL birdsofshore March 15 2014, 07:45:42 UTC
OMFG. This is 100 words, you say? One hundred words of GUH.

And look at YOUR verbs! Admonished made me whimper. Sagged and cradled also very wonderful. And the details: the shirt yanked up, Harry's rough palm, the lean to wipe the steam away so they can see. Ack. You are so good to us. This is swoony delicious, all that I hoped for when I left the prompt, and more.

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Re: mirror -- FILL traintracks March 15 2014, 23:54:17 UTC
Eeeeeeeeeeeee!!! Thank you so much! I'm thrilled you liked it! I was going to do the Mirror of Erised, but then the boys were all 'Screw that. Bathroom mirror's fine. Get to it, woman!'

;-)

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Re: mirror -- FILL capitu March 15 2014, 11:42:27 UTC
*is dead* I can picture this perfectly. Oh yes.

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Re: mirror -- FILL traintracks March 15 2014, 23:56:32 UTC
Thanks, bb! :-DD

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Re: mirror -- FILL nenne March 18 2014, 12:54:01 UTC
Hot! *fans self*

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Re: mirror -- FILL traintracks March 18 2014, 17:59:36 UTC
Thanks so much!!!

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