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head_fangs

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Oct 23, 2006 15:27

Well, as I was home from school today, and I already had all of my work done, I found myself with a lot of free time today, so I decided to try my hand at poetry! ^_^

( A Dream )

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borntokickass October 23 2006, 20:30:44 UTC

Uh. This poem seemed sad.

head_fangs October 23 2006, 20:38:43 UTC

Saa...I guess it kind of is, huh? It felt good to write, though...

borntokickass October 23 2006, 20:40:38 UTC

You can't really fly though, can you?

head_fangs October 23 2006, 20:42:31 UTC

Well...no.

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shinya_dane October 23 2006, 20:36:27 UTC

YOU call THIS poetry???

Where are the RHYMES, dane??? :O :O :O :O :O

(OOC: Aaaaw, that is depressing. Poor Oishi ;__;)

head_fangs October 23 2006, 20:39:41 UTC

Ah, it'd be considered something more of a freeform style, Yanagisawa-san. ^^;

((I know, right? ;o;))

shinya_dane October 23 2006, 20:40:48 UTC

But it's not a poem if it doesn't RHYME, dane!!!

Trust me!! I've written LOTS of poems!!!

head_fangs October 23 2006, 20:44:47 UTC

Well I...suppose some people could feel that way, but much of the modern poetry follows very little rhyme.

bragginghor October 23 2006, 21:05:00 UTC

AWESOME POEM, OISHI-SENPAI!!!

head_fangs October 23 2006, 21:10:16 UTC

Thank you, Horio. ^_^

princeofwriting October 23 2006, 22:25:47 UTC

I like it.

nekonyahoi October 23 2006, 23:40:33 UTC

Good job, Oishi!