My opinion, as promised.lunaticwhoreFebruary 10 2004, 20:33:48 UTC
I like this. I would like to receive something like this, sometime in my life. If I were Missa, this would probably make me cry. Or at least come close to crying. Though I'm more of a fan of simple, blunt poetry, I like your use of big words. It makes it more powerful, and that's what love poetry should contain.
and today, let's embrace and prove there is more than possesions in this world. I think you hit the nail on the head with this one. It's really honest and...heartlifting? for lack of a better word.
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Though I'm more of a fan of simple, blunt poetry, I like your use of big words. It makes it more powerful, and that's what love poetry should contain.
and today, let's embrace and prove there is more than possesions in this world.
I think you hit the nail on the head with this one. It's really honest and...heartlifting? for lack of a better word.
Overall, good work. As usual.
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