Comments | heads_bang: he will do very well

heads_bang

he will do very well

Jul 06, 2012 22:52

i can tell, i can tell

Pairing: gd/top
Rating: r (overall mature themes)
Summary: Seunghyun falls for a serial killer.
1064 words~
Prompt: Immortal [ x]

( He knows, Jiyong always knew, that Seunghyun was a sucker for pretty things. And well Jiyong is as pretty as they come. )

fandom: big bang, pairing: gd/top, length: oneshot

Comments 13

irm_cik July 10 2012, 17:57:26 UTC

oh i like this :D
i love dark gtop fics and this was perfect!lol i wish there was more to it

heads_bang July 10 2012, 22:33:38 UTC

thank you :) i'm trying to get into the habit of writing daily so hopefully my future fics will have more to them. thanks again for reading~

dragontory July 10 2012, 20:30:31 UTC

Wow.. the way you have Ji describing death sent chills down my spine. Creepy!Ji might be my favourite Ji...
This wonderful piece from the one word prompt 'Immortal'? Even more wow.

Thanks for writing this! Memming. ^^

heads_bang July 10 2012, 22:35:24 UTC

haha i've been adoring creepy!Ji since his "She's Gone" days... never gets tired. and I really do believe he has an obsessive personality though, not to this extent obviously... but it's always fun to fantasize~ thank you for reading and commenting~ <3

gdontop July 10 2012, 20:43:35 UTC

I just posted a GTOP serial killer fic too, lol. Gah, this was... I hesitate to say sexy, because it makes me feel even more deviant than I already know I am, but it was, in a way. And also sad. Falling in love with someone who won't and can't ever love you back. We humans are very good at fooling ourselves, though. Bah. Anyway, this was excellent! Thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you.

heads_bang July 10 2012, 22:39:07 UTC

Yeah I noticed that you wrote that too!.. sorry i haven't gotten a chance to sit down and properly read it and comment yet, but i definitely will! Lol guess i'm into the more darker angstier themes as well. actually spent a good hour of my time researching guns and bullets just for this fic. and idk I've just always found murders intriguing. hmmm i've probably watched too much criminal minds~
anyways thanks for reading and commenting hun. And i promise to get to your fic later tonight too~

gdontop July 10 2012, 22:58:08 UTC

Yes, I know all about some research. I watched sooooo many serial killer documentaries and biographies in preparation for my fic. But hey, it's fun and interesting, and I have a deep, deep love of abnormal psych.

ittybittydaiyu July 11 2012, 05:38:37 UTC

.....
Scary as hell
Never read dark GTOP
This....this is interesting

heads_bang July 11 2012, 11:44:45 UTC

lmao sorry??... haha but thank you for giving it a chance and commenting~

ninevolt_doll July 11 2012, 13:02:12 UTC

“Wanna know what the best thing about killing someone is?”
^ And the following lines describing the answer to this question were so freaking beautiful.A bit grotesque, but still beautiful. Great job on that ~^-^

I had a feeling that Seunghyun is doing the murders because he can't leave Jiyong-- that's why he didn't have a preferred "killing style". And then Jiyong is also fond of Seunghyun, that's why he's so eager to make him see the beauty behind killing people.

I know the story is about murders, but it really gave off a peaceful feeling. I dunno, maybe it's just me and my gtop feels ^-^

heads_bang July 11 2012, 14:28:39 UTC

wow wow can i love you down? you really just got my fic and i'm extremely glad you enjoyed it. i know it's not everyone's cup of tea, but if at least someone (*cough* like you *cough*) can appreciate the dark themes and attractive gruesomeness then I know it wasn't a complete fail~~

thank you for reading and commenting and for your analysis. i didn't mean for it to be angsty so I'm glad you got peaceful vibes from it. lol thanks again and haha we could probably cause a flood with all our gtop feels~ :)