I'm playing Yellow from a month or so after the events of Emerald Arc (she'll be updated with HGSS if she plays a part). I've been playing her for what feels like a very long time now, but I'd still love to hear any suggestions one might have to improve her. so if you have suggestions for how she sounds and acts, please tell me here!
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I don't find much wrong with your Yellow at all really, so good on you there. My problem lies with Gold and her's relationship. I'm not coming out to say it sucks because I don't ship it, it's more I find a problem with Yellow being in character because of it.
From what I understand she was in a relationship with another PokeSpe Red in the DR, until the mun idled out or wasn't posting or something, like I said I'm not sure. But due to how long Yellow nursed her little crush/later to be affection on Red in the manga and how abruptly she seemed to forget about him and start liking Gold in the DR, just seems really OOC to me.
They've been through a hell of a lot together, and she never really seemed to forget about him at all when they weren't together in the manga, so I just find it hard to believe they'd drift so far so quickly and she'd fall in love with
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However, in the recent Yellow+Gold+Silver thread... it seems like you've kind of sacrificed some of Yellow's characterization in order to add drama to the relationship. I felt like her reactions were perfectly IC until the second comment here (http://community.livejournal.com/pokedressing/738263.html?thread=71314391#t71314391), where it... sort of went off track in a big way.
I think the biggest issue here is that Yellow doesn't seem to be taking the fact that Paul tried to kill Silver and wants to ruin every Gold he meets too seriously. She yells her boyfriend about how it's wrong to punch Paul once and tell him to try and take the various Silvers' feelings into consideration and basically tells him he's a monster for it (and doesn't even target ( ... )
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I realized what I should have done only when the thread was partway through. Once that realization hit, I was frustrated and ended the thread as soon as I could to get back out of it.
It was a bad play on my part. But next time I start getting roped into drama when I don't want it, I'll say no, so that I don't have to force myself to play along when I'm not feeling well enough to handle it appropriately and ICly.
Thanks for realizing how crappy I did that. I really shouldn't have, and just asked Kyo to do it elsewhere. That was my poor judgment.
I promise better quality from Yellow in the future, anon.
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Anyway, don't have anything else to say! Aside from that little blip (which you did a pretty darn good job of recovering from), you've been doing a great job with her. I will continue stalking her eternally : )
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I am so glad to hear back from you, and I'm glad to hear that you're happy with where she's gone from there! Your crit really was what made me stop being too frustrated to deal with drama and handle the situation the way she would have naturally, so I'm glad you saw that through.
Actually, that's a clever idea! Maybe her next post can illustrate that. ;)
Thanks for watching me from the anonymous shadows and reaching out to keep me in line! Feel free to crit me any time!
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