help me with my poem

[heart_songs]

An Emblem of Hope  is the title

this is my tribute to 9/11

contribue a line or more
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[peace2you]

Our hearts were broke that september day

[heart_songs]

No words to make it okay

[starshine2night]

Into the void our hero's went,
For the lucky few saved, they were angels sent.

The clouds now weep teardrops falling from the sky.
The sorrow itself, made the very clouds cry.