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lovedracula November 28 2008, 05:52:46 UTC
Awwwh, so sweet. Well the end anyway. =P I'ma continue with not using names haha though of course it's not that hard to figure out xD

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heartagram_lala November 28 2008, 06:18:03 UTC
thanks you!!!

yeah names are bad (since when) lol

pee ess, dogs rule!

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ruafair November 28 2008, 18:03:13 UTC
Wow, that was powerful, especially the first part!!! I loved it my dear!!

Fi

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heartagram_lala November 29 2008, 03:11:59 UTC
thanks hun, i'm glad you liked it!

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mscatmoon November 30 2008, 03:19:18 UTC
Hi! Very nice comparison of the two relationships, the two women in Mick's life. Unique idea as well, for using that one act and showing Mick's feelings. I think that says it all, really.

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heartagram_lala November 30 2008, 05:24:09 UTC
thank you =D

I have no idea where the idea came from, it literally smacked me over the head lol.

i'm glad you liked it!

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halfcent November 30 2008, 05:48:00 UTC
That was really great, I loved it. Of course, it was nothing to figure out who was who, but I like the way you showed the differences between the two women, as well as the differences in the way Mick feels toward them and for them. Great idea!

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heartagram_lala November 30 2008, 05:48:58 UTC
thank you =D

i'm glad it was easy enough to figure out who was who!

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anangelfalls December 7 2008, 18:44:54 UTC
Well.... I'll tell you this much.....

IT WAS AMAZING AS USUAL!!!

See...You got all caps ^^

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heartagram_lala December 7 2008, 18:52:41 UTC
*giggles* THANKS!!! <--- you get all caps too, coz YOU ROCK!!!

Glad you're back!

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anangelfalls December 9 2008, 03:13:14 UTC
*BOWS* NOT AS MUCH AS YOU DO!!!! (Even my actions are in all caps)

I am too!!!

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