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heartagram_lala

Keep Me Safe - Half Truths - Moonlight fic

Jan 07, 2009 03:28

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tv:moonlight:character:beth turner, tv:moonlight:pairing:mick/beth, tv:moonlight, fic:keep me safe, tv:moonlight:character:mick st john, tv:moonlight:character:josh lindsey

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xfirefly9x January 6 2009, 16:48:38 UTC

Wow, nice! ♥

heartagram_lala January 6 2009, 16:49:15 UTC

Thanks =D

ruafair January 6 2009, 17:32:34 UTC

Oh that was so so good. I really do love how you've captured Beth's voice in all the chapters!!!

Excellent update my dear.

Fina

heartagram_lala January 6 2009, 17:34:24 UTC

Thanks hun =D

I dont know why but Beth is really easy for me to write, so yeah i'm using and abusing it LOL.

glad you liked it!

PS HOT ICON!

elwren75 January 7 2009, 02:20:20 UTC

I always wanted to see Josh's reaction to Beth's rescue by Mick. You've done a great job characterizing him here. Loved it!

heartagram_lala January 7 2009, 06:50:12 UTC

So did i, i think it would have shown the start of the 'rivalry' and Josh's jealousness.

I'm glad you found this in character and liked how i (or the muses) wrote it

Thanks for your comment!!!

bleudaisy January 7 2009, 02:39:36 UTC

Best line of this chapter...

“So real Mick, not stuffed Mick, knows you are in danger and then crashes his car into Daniels?” Josh surmises and asks for confirmation.

LOL! I can actually see Josh's squinty confused look when he said this. Just priceles!

Loved this chapter! ^_^

heartagram_lala January 7 2009, 06:51:37 UTC

Lol yeah i could totally see Josh stalking around Beth's apartment, his visage changing from tight ass attorney to worried boyfriend and back and forth.

Glad you liked it hun, means a lot (as you know)

=D

bleudaisy January 7 2009, 08:23:42 UTC

Yeah, it's hilarious how he keeps making the distinction between real Mick and stuffed Mick. I love stuffed Mick. *^_^* I'd like to have a stuffed Mick. How cute!!!

heartagram_lala January 7 2009, 09:34:41 UTC

I love stuffed Mick too, and yeah i want a stuffed Mick all for myself... and a real Mick too!

=D

sourfacekitty January 7 2009, 05:01:41 UTC

Wow! Great chapter!

But I need some MickBeth.

Can't wait for next chapter!!

:D

heartagram_lala January 7 2009, 06:52:29 UTC

thanks, i'm glad you liked it!

And yeah there is more MickBeth coming up, don't you worry, i will make up for all my muse's evilness by writing Josh scenes =D