[03] the shape of my name in your mouth; qmi; pg

[heartcity]

title: the shape of my name in your mouth
fandom: super junior m
pairing: zhou mi/kyuhyun
rating: PG
summary: in china, they call him "kui xian", but kyuhyun only wants to be kui xian for one person.

Comments

[coley_merrin]

;___; This is just so nice and beautiful and... I could read these two all day, every day. <3 The learning, and Zhou Mi sleeping and... <3

That last line is just... Just... Yes. <3<3<3

[mardigrasmaven]

That was absolutely gorgeous.
Every time Zhou Mi says "奎贤", Kyuhyun hears "我爱你".

And that was such a beautiful line. I love that he hears that when he hears the perfect Kui Xian being spoken from Zhou Mi's lips.

"周觅," he says, shaping the name with lips and tasting it on his tongue, sweet. Zhou Mi.
I like that one a lot too, the pun on Zhou Mi's name being like the sweet taste on his tongue... a taste of honey, I'm thinking.

Amazing. Simply amazing. ♥

[shizukusa]

This was so sweet and so beautiful ♥ You have their dynamics down well.
And ugh, I love it too when Zhou Mi calls him 'Kui Xian'.

"周觅," he says, shaping the name with lips and tasting it on his tongue, sweet. Zhou Mi.

"Kui Xian," Zhou Mi murmurs sleepily, shifting slightly. He nuzzles closer until his cheek is pressed firmly against Kyuhyun's shoulder, his breath warm against Kyuhyun's neck.

I just had to quote that. That was the sweetest thing ever ;____; They're so perfect, ugh, it breaks my heart.

This was so, so lovely ♥

[loveslipped]

Wonderfully written and just very sweet ♥

我爱你
I'm taking a wild guess this means I love you? :)

[plastikxteukie]

too beautiful!
i love the last line
<3