Comments | heartcity: [04] it's only you for me; qmi; pg

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[04] it's only you for me; qmi; pg

Sep 21, 2009 22:09

title: it's only you for me
fandom: super junior m
pairing: zhou mi/kyuhyun, sungmin/kyuhyun
rating: PG
summary: as time goes by, kyuhyun's heart changes.
notes: partially inspired by the lyrics to it's you.

( Sungmin sighed and rolled over with a soft rustle; as Kyuhyun let their fingers be linked together, he thought that it was like flipping a page of a book and finding blank pages. )

p: zhou mi/kyuhyun, p: sungmin/kyuhyun, f: super junior

Comments 9

eluctare September 22 2009, 04:05:52 UTC

This is lovely. Soft and gentle and a little bittersweet. This part in particular made me smile because it's so them:

(Hi, Zhou Mi says with a smile. He brushes Kyuhyun's hair off his forehead, fingers lingering against Kyuhyun's cheek. Good morning.

Kyuhyun smiles back.)

And the use of the It's You lyrics were a rather nice touch. :3 Thanks for sharing~ ♥

xlovelights September 22 2009, 04:10:25 UTC

Beautiful. Simply stunning.

I love your Qmi.

kagami222 September 22 2009, 06:03:35 UTC

:( Why is this so wonderful. Why is everything you write so wonderful.

Everything is so lyrical and flowing, yet grounded with a comfortable structure. I especially liked:

He can't seem to help himself around Zhou Mi, even adrift in a sea of words he doesn't understand and jokes he doesn't get; there is always this anchor, a hand on his arm, and arm over his shoulders, a shoulder for him to lay his head against, to pull him safely to port.

Beautiful, sad, and real.. The kind of story that is like nourishment and not just dessert~ Love it so much!

mardigrasmaven September 22 2009, 06:32:10 UTC

Ah that was gorgeous. Seriously. It flowed very well. The tic toc between he and Sungmin and he and Zhou Mi... the lyrics... just really good. :D

sarah_nghae September 22 2009, 09:47:46 UTC

this was so great. it was so touching. I almost shed tears.

Hope you write more! Thankyou for sharing!!

Hwaiting!!