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[05] like a paper airplane to your heart; qmi; g

Sep 28, 2009 14:46

title: like a paper airplane to your heart
fandom: super junior m
pairing: zhou mi/kyuhyun
rating: G
summary: kyuhyun's love letters are written in paper and sent by plane.

( The white paper sailed into the air with a swing of his arm, arcing above their heads to momentarily block out the sun. Then it moved on, across that blue sky like a determined little folded cloud, diving with a purpose into Zhou Mi's arm. )

p: zhou mi/kyuhyun, f: super junior

Comments 15

eluctare September 29 2009, 02:05:12 UTC

Oh, my heart. This is just so... I'm not even sure what the word I'm looking for is. Charming? Refreshing? Like a gentle breeze or a spot of sunshine or maybe an airy wisp of a cloud. I clearly fail at waxing poetic, so I'll stop.

But the paper planes. Boys being boys ♥. QMiHenHae leader defense to the rescue! And Henry being a traitor and going to the other side. I love them so much.

Thank you for brightening my day. :)

One small thing I noticed. The two "suddenly"s are redundant: "Help!" wailed Ryeowook from beside them, taking off suddenly at a run suddenly.

ai_sumairu September 29 2009, 03:46:10 UTC

They're all so cute and adorable!!! ^-^

QMi never stops to make my heart flutter... They make me so happy even if they're just standing close to each other without any exchange of words. :)

This is nice and it made me giggle that Kyu always fall for Mimi's trick! XD

shinelikethesky September 29 2009, 04:18:07 UTC

:) I love this. When I read this, I felt like it was still a bright summer day with nothing on the agenda. That's what this story reminded me of anyways, haha.

<33

reader_a September 29 2009, 06:20:05 UTC

that was just so cute!
they are adorable!

suju_addicted September 29 2009, 15:27:35 UTC

They make playing paper airplanes seem fun =)