help_japan || [22] the arithmetics of basic equations | PG-13 | kyu/ofc, qmi

[heartcity]

I thought about it. My thread for help_japan is here.

the arithmetics of basic equations
kyuhyun/ofc, zhou mi/kyuhyun | pg-13 | 1750w
three is always one too many for a relationship.

Comments

[kyuhyunlover3]

asbdjkbejjah its sad. and yet cute. and....idek xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

[freakymod]

wow.
normally I don't really enjoy/go for fics with additional female characters/self-insert-ish fics, but I think you pulled this one off really well. It's real, and bittersweet, and incredibly poignant, and it doesn't come off as overly fantastical or dramatic. ♥
thank you for writing this, and good luck with help_japan!

[ogawa_kaori]

;____;
This is ... I don't know how to describe it
I don't usually read any fic with original female character, but this one ... it's different! Beautiful in some unique way, and saddening at the same time.

Totally love this!! <3

[cloudream]

this is really sweet and sad. i'm speechless and i don't really have much to say orz. but i absolutely love the way you write ♥

[anonymous]

oh wow, i really liked this. i liked the way you wrote it -- not just the second person, but how the tone turned from loving and kind of doubtful to full blown jealously. it also reminds me of something i read; the difference between falling in love and falling in lust, and also about just loving someone and wanting to have sex. it's like kyuhyun's relationship with the girl was typical; meet, date, have sex, marry and have a kid. while his relationship with zhou mi was something beyond the normal expectations; all feelings and just love, nothing more. no kissing. no sex.

really interesting writing, and i really liked how you handled it ♥

[starlitbright]

wow this was not meant to be anon, sorry!

[heartcity]

you hit upon everything i wanted to tell in this story ♥