Comments | heartilly_rinoa: Rinoa ficlet

heartilly_rinoa

Rinoa ficlet

Oct 13, 2003 21:00

OOC: I have had this bouncing around in my head ever since we did our scene. I'll lock it for now just because I know our part with Rin/Cid/Ramza hasn't really "happened" yet. After that is posted then I'll unlock it so that everyone else can read it...Perhaps if you all like it enough I'll post it in the community. I warn you, it's sappy, but ( Read more... )

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highwind_cid October 13 2003, 19:39:05 UTC

((ooc))
I like it a lot. I want it to be longer! There was so much more going on that night that could be expanded upon. I like your writing style here... please expand a little? Please? ^_^

heartilly_rinoa October 13 2003, 19:42:48 UTC

((OOC)) *blushes madly*

Well I intended it to just be a small showing of what Rin is feeling right now. I didn't mean it to be a full fic. But if you want, I can extend it later once we know more of what's going on with our bunch.

Jennilee

highwind_cid October 13 2003, 20:04:59 UTC

((ooc))
I understand how it shouldn't be a full fic... it just seems like there's so much more that could be going through her mind... to make this longer than just a few lines, so it seems. I want more! ^_^ Rinoa, Cid, and Ramza is just such an unlikely party, it demands you to expand upon it. Especially with Rinoa pining after Seifer... I dunno. Maybe this could be some sort of arc going on here. I'd love to write a side of this.