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The Young Mr. Cain, chapter 2

Mar 10, 2008 20:34

Title: The Young Mr. Cain, chapter 2
Author: Cricket
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Even a jaded Tin Man was young once.
Disclaimer: Sadly, not mine. I'm just playing with the toys of the respectful owners.
Word Count: 1357
Author's Note: Beta'ed by the amazing angel932 and fabulous trystan830.

( It felt as though he'd been run over by a truck, a very heavy truck, repeatedly. )

Comments 16

randhforever March 11 2008, 05:14:05 UTC

Well done! Please let me know if you want me to beta for you again.

thecricket March 11 2008, 05:57:31 UTC

Thanks! I wasn't sure if you were willing to beta more than just that first chapter, but I'll definitely send you the next one if you're interested. It'll be great to have an extra set of eyes :)

randhforever March 12 2008, 00:11:45 UTC

Ok. Whenever you're ready is fine with me.

wylouloucoyote March 11 2008, 14:36:43 UTC

Ack! Poor Cain. That must be terribly confusing. This is great.

thecricket March 12 2008, 04:04:41 UTC

Thanks for reading!

BTW, I love your icon :)

padmekenobi27 March 14 2008, 02:01:11 UTC

This is very very interesting! I hope you can update soon! I'm very intrigued. :D