mcfly-slash ... Who you gonna run to?

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okay, so here i am again. after a saturday of getting a taste of lindsay lohan's lifestyle (minus shagging harry judd unfortunately), a sunday of feeling rotten and a monday of fall out boy, i am back to the lifestyle of a writer. and back to drama-mood since i'm obviously much better at writing drama than at writing fluff. and i'm bringing you

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[b_u_n_n_i_e_s]

Awwwww! But....the PUDD!!! Think of the PUDD!!! Hehe, that was a really good story

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Think of the PUDD!!!
i do .. more than it's healthy actually. hehe! i just didn't do it here.

glad that you like the story.

[kirstini]

Awww I love it! It was a good idea and really well written.

That song inspired me too! I wrote and posted a fic a couple of weeks ago. I love that song so much. Infact I love the album! <3

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thank you so much!

and mind you, i knew i read a story inspired by a song of the willis but i couldn't figure out for the life of me which story or which song it was.

the album is ace, innit?

[scribblemusic]

How wonderful.

You're such a great writer. I loved both sides, but I feel so sad for Harry!!!

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thanks for that, like .. everything! *hugs you*

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ah no biggie .. you gave me the idea for this after all *hugs you*

glad you liked it!

[first_spike]

You know, if anyone ever tells you that you should stop writing, poke them in the eye.

The thing I like most about your writing is that it's very thoughtful. It seems that you look deep into your characters for why they do and feel the things they do, and it adds richness to your stories. We care for the characters

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wow! that was the longest comment i got so far! well, on anything mcfly that is

[first_spike]

You're welcome :-)

Accent may be the wrong word. I just mean that there are a few things that German (or French, Spanish, Chinese,...) people sometimes do: the order they use for certain words, or a phrase that is correct, but not what a native speaker would say or write. You can probably tell German that has been written by someone who isn't German.

Example: you wrote i consider myself actually quite good when it comes to speak and understand and even write english, and an English speaker would be more likely to write i actually consider myself quite good when it comes to speaking and understanding and even writing English. Why? It's as hard to explain as why one says machen die Tur zu instead of machen die Tur an... It's just the way it is. :-)

With saying things without saying them in mind, here's something you might like to think about. Imagine writing this story again, but so that Harry never tells what he feels about Dougie - maybe he doesn't realise, or maybe he doesn't want to admit it - yet it's so obvious that the reader

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you know what, i think it's seriously amazing that you can tell i am not english. it's like .. dunno .. it proves me that you actually read and pay attention to my stories. not that others don't do but you do it just .. differently i guess. and just because i'm curious about your german .. are you german as well?

With saying things without saying them in mind, here's something you might like to think about. Imagine writing this story again, but so that Harry never tells what he feels about Dougie - maybe he doesn't realise, or maybe he doesn't want to admit it - yet it's so obvious that the reader is practically shouting, "you love him, you idiot!" What would you need to do differently? Might be fun to try that, sometime.you know what? that is a kick arse idea! i think i'll really try it. not with this story tho, with a completely new one or something