mcfly-slash ... I try

[hearts_slash]

Title: I try
Author: me
Rating: PG-13
Chapter: 1/1 … Standalone
Genre: Drama
Pairing: PoynterJudd
Summary: Being stuck isn’t fun.
Disclaimer: me no own, this no true.
Dedication: Cazzabum and filthymind who I both happen to love dearly! also ichnal, scribblemusic and all you good people out there, waiting for a non-teenie post. I really and truly hope you guys like this one

Comments

[beckystark06]

OOO i liked that Much-o
But i got reall confused
was that harry talking, and please excuse my simple mind if its very obvious!
xx

[hearts_slash]

erm .. it does says poynter/judd right .. and the person who talks is talking to dougie .. so that leaves who doing the talking then? person named judd .. which would be harry.

it actually is obvious!

[beckystark06]

oh yeah, that dose make sense, sorry im just so slow :)
x

[fadingxreality]

aw i love poynterjudd :)

well done!

[hearts_slash]

thank you!

[earenya_beryl]

I started reading it as Poynter POV, but then naer the end I notice the name, therefore i re-read with Judd POV. That's the only confusing thing about it.

Other than that I really liked the lines...
"You have me, Dougie. You have the strongest hold on me. Everything that I am, everything that’s inside of me loves you. I not only want to be with you, I need to be with you. You are what keeps me going. Your touches, your looks, they are what keeps me alive sometimes."

and yes, everyone says you should be together...
Thanks for posting..:O)

[hearts_slash]

that was actually what i was meant to be doing. i wanted people to think it was dougie speaking. only to be surprised when it wasn't him. that's me .. i do weird things like that.

glad that you liked it!

[flithymind]

Yeah I was the same I read Poynter POV first cos you love him so much Pam, but then it was all good when I realsied it was Harry!
Keep up the good work.
Tennies will be beaten.

[hearts_slash]

haha .. had you fooled, eh? i did something like that in a very old simple plan-fic. people thought it was one pov and in the end it was the other person of the pairing. it's just me not doing what people expect.

still love dougie so much though ;)

yeah, go down teenies!

[scribblemusic]

*applauds*

*then points to dedications and smiles*

Thank you!

I love this story.

But... NO SEQUEL?!!!! GAH. Just... stab me, why don't you? LOL

[hearts_slash]

*points at dedication* everything i said there is utterly true!

nah, i think i'll leave it like that. well .. maybe. with me you never really know, do you? ;)

[hearts_slash]

good idea actually. but i don't know if i could do it. let's leave this at a maybe alright? maybe inspiration hits me and i'll write the other pov.