i really liked your story. it was really emotional and the feelings were so true. a while ago my boyfriend broke up with me and started dating a girl he knew i hated and a few months later he said he wanted me back. this pretty much sums up emotionally how i felt. great job. i can't wait to read more of your work. and it is a really good song. it really fit the story well. and please post your "non-angry" piece!
oh no, sorry to hear that your boyfriend broke up with you and all that. and please don't take him back, you don't deserve such a rat anyway, believe me!
i didn't. if he had really loved me he would have never done that to me. I know that some part of him misses me but he's just not good enough. thanks for your reply! i'm just about to go and read your non-angry version!
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Good though, but it made me sad haha :( You should definately post the other version! ^^
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and the other version isn't much different. just less angry.
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I love that song too!! It fit very well with the story!
Ooh, can I have the "happy" piece?
*gives cookies*
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the song's awesome, innit?
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I think maybe its like the discharge from all the crack!fic thoughts that are going on XD
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I really loved this part. So full of emotions and angst
I enjoy reading those fics once in awhile
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I'd say it was a bit of both
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