Ohh. You just broke my heart. This thing have happen to me as well. Fallen in love with your best friend. (He is a boy and I'm a girl, and yes we had a night together as well) Not a god thing to do. Things never turns out this well in real life... and I lost him.
I like your story. It felt like.. I donno good i some weird way. Thanks for posting. <3
i had to leave it there. there was no other ending possible. when i started writing i was downright depressed over something and i wanted it to end really badly but then when i wrote the end i was my happy self again but i still couldn't make a happy ending. it just wouldn't have fit with the story. stories like that can't have a happily ever after.
i think it's good that they had this one night. because they'll always have something to remember.
i'm quite glad i'm back too. i really need the writing. it always helps me throught things .. this story did too.
i'm fine now. and it's good to finally say that after feeling worse than miserable for almost three months!
You are fantasmical. I missed you lots, you know :(
And yes, that line... Oh, that line... You know that phenomena when you read something and even though you've moved on to the next sentence, the words are still flashing behind your eyelids and pulsing in your conscious mind? That's exactly what that line did to me.
I really wish I could, even if just to stop it from hurting so much when I look at you.
*shudders* As I said before, you are just too fantasmical.
I think I need to go find some duct tape to stick all the pieces of my heart back together.
Wow I missed this story by like a month...foreverlove_xxAugust 10 2008, 20:48:06 UTC
I loved every bit of that story. and this line I really wish I could, even if just to stop it from hurting so much when I look at you. I'm in love with that line!
I'm memming this :D and I'm going to go find that song because i love it...
i'm glad you have something that helps you. my way is just spilling my guts out onto paper. i wish i were able to do it through writing but it usually doesnt work out for me. (hopefully this is what you're talking about...)
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I honestly don't know what to say. That was just wow
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I like your story. It felt like.. I donno good i some weird way. Thanks for posting. <3
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glad you liked the story though. and i definitely appreciate that it felt good to you.
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i think it's good that they had this one night. because they'll always have something to remember.
i'm quite glad i'm back too. i really need the writing. it always helps me throught things .. this story did too.
i'm fine now. and it's good to finally say that after feeling worse than miserable for almost three months!
glad you liked the story!
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And yes, that line... Oh, that line... You know that phenomena when you read something and even though you've moved on to the next sentence, the words are still flashing behind your eyelids and pulsing in your conscious mind? That's exactly what that line did to me.
I really wish I could, even if just to stop it from hurting so much when I look at you.
*shudders* As I said before, you are just too fantasmical.
I think I need to go find some duct tape to stick all the pieces of my heart back together.
♥
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yeah, that line kind of haunted me as well.
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and this line
I really wish I could, even if just to stop it from hurting so much when I look at you.
I'm in love with that line!
I'm memming this :D
and I'm going to go find that song because i love it...
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glad you loved the story.
it's one of my therapeutic real-life things and it really means a lot to me as well.
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Ainslie Henderson - Keep Me A Secret.mp3
i'm glad you have something that helps you. my way is just spilling my guts out onto paper.
i wish i were able to do it through writing but it usually doesnt work out for me.
(hopefully this is what you're talking about...)
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