McFly-slash ... Back in Wonderland

Oct 06, 2009 22:20

again. sorry for the terrible lack of fic. my plot bunnies are dying one after another it seems. but hey, at least i wrote something long now so that should do for the next weeks/months without stuff from me ( Read more... )

angst-drama, romance, mcfly, standalone, poynter-judd

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stargirl82 October 6 2009, 22:02:26 UTC
i have to admit i'm quite speechless at the moment... and i can't really see through my tears. this is so fucking brilliant.

i loved the dark atmosphere, loved the way it only got worse and worse until the storm finally stopped, leaving them both soaking wet in the rain, so to speak. loved how they have each other to keep them warm and just as soon as they can get out of the rain and back inside, back home, back to wonderland, everything will be all right again.

*bows down* this is one of the best angsty stories i have ever read. amazing. simply amazing.

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hearts_slash October 7 2009, 08:41:11 UTC
thank you so very much for all your kind words. means a lot!

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niceandloud October 6 2009, 22:09:10 UTC
life is ironic, just early today i was reading a few of your fictions, haha.

i cannot describe how much this fiction made me feel broken, sad, and at the same time happy. in the past few days ive had people telling me it's dougie's life and he's happy with frankie and "aaaw theyre so adorable" crap it's good to see someone else looks at it from the point of view Doug's become something stupid and he doesnt belong with "her" lol few people think that way.
i love this so much, i wish it was real. yes it's paintful, but especially the end, oh man. It's soo perfect, Harry broken - unlike he usually is, Dougie all happy with the lady, and honestly you've put into words everything ive been thinking for the past days. especially this bit:

"Harry doesn’t know when or how it happened, he just knows who happened ( ... )

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hearts_slash October 7 2009, 09:01:56 UTC
if you feel like reading more from me (and have too much time on your hands too), you can go read Boys of Summer, When you say nothing at all or No Regrets. 'boys of summer' was a reader's favorite (even though i never liked it that much), 'when you say nothing at all' is manuanya's favorite and 'no regrets' is my personal favorite and in my opinion the best thing i ever came up with (and i never will be able to come up with something this good again, either). so yeah, hope you enjoy reading my old stuff. leave comments ( ... )

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manuanya October 7 2009, 11:28:59 UTC
aw, yes, i'm gonna read when you say nothing at all again now. for the 134891234710234 time. but i haven't read it in a few weeks :P

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hearts_slash October 7 2009, 11:49:37 UTC
should i test you on it? which word comes after the 15th 'and'? ;)

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elisa88 April 12 2010, 02:07:13 UTC
LOVE THIS!
are you psychic? coz i'm pretty sure THIS is what happened. Harry's no longer with Izzy and Dougie is Frankie-free =P *throws a party for he mcslashers*

i really enjoyed reading this, you're a great writer.
=)

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hearts_slash April 12 2010, 09:46:19 UTC
thank you very much!

hehe, maybe i am psychic because i wrote this when dougie was definitely still with frankie.

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irrelevantduh June 6 2010, 05:40:24 UTC
lol ive read the story than comments

comments are funny (im not stalkerish or anything...)

anyway, just thought id update this little frankie-bashing party

erm, shes back...

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greencurtains December 16 2011, 14:34:28 UTC
I'm not crying,
I just walked under a sprinkler..... an indoor sprinkler.
(Wonderful <3)

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