Life Looks Better In Spring|Kemaru|G

Jun 02, 2010 13:16


"Kibum missed Kevin, no doubt about it.
'Tell me everything, I want to know the whole story, and do not miss anything out!' Kibum heard an all too familiar voice whisper in his ear. Looking up, there stood a sight possibly more beautiful than spring, Kevin".
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s2_otter June 2 2010, 14:38:02 UTC
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Your a traitor how can you promise me forever then just leave me like this? is what Kevin whispered back, voice breaking as a result of all the screeching.
I love this <3 My heart broke but I'm probably a sadist so I love this. It's so beautiful to say it like this :D
Aw Kevin! /cuddles
Obviously. I was even shocked someone could name this feeling of attraction "Love", more so if someone could describe the feeling of losing.

Kibum! Kevin didn't move on!
You guys love each other so much, you should put some faith in Kevin <33
And although there's no one to deny Kevin's beauty <33, I love the way you wrote it. Instead of plain beautiful or describing his skin and all,
Looking up, there stood a sight possibly more beautiful than spring, Kevin.
This is just marvelous :D

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heartsickhealme June 2 2010, 15:06:39 UTC
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

Thank you so much :)

Yeah, I wanted to show two sides to Kevin, the emotional side and the forgiving side :)

Originally, I had decided that nothing can comapre to Kevin's beauty, but spring is too beautiful to not be used as a comparison ♥

Thank you so much for reading and enjoying :) ♥

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s2_otter June 2 2010, 15:10:20 UTC
<33

No problem :)

Haha, normally two sides to a person is an angel and a devil. For Kevin it's only emotional and forgiving XD

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heartsickhealme June 2 2010, 15:42:12 UTC
Although Kevin also has an angelic side :D

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heartsickhealme June 2 2010, 15:46:28 UTC
I shall fix your broken heart :)♥

Thank you for reading :D

You are the awesome one. ♥

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heartsickhealme June 2 2010, 15:52:59 UTC
Okay first off- Your icon is full of win :D

Secondly. I am just about finished reading your "Books & Noise" fic and...wow.

I think your writing is just beautiful. ♥

Just write from your heart, it can't go wrong ;-)

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akari_hayashi June 2 2010, 15:22:13 UTC
Beautifully done. Of course Kevin would wait, Kibum is doing what he has to do, Kevin will understand. :)

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heartsickhealme June 2 2010, 15:47:07 UTC
Why thank you very much bb :)

Thanks for reading ♥

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nicolochy June 2 2010, 16:38:53 UTC
When I first read the title I was like "Oh it's that Eurovision song!" Hehe.

It's cute! I guess when Kibum promised forever, Kevin promised through thick and thin.

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heartsickhealme June 2 2010, 17:08:51 UTC
Lol yep, that Eurovision song, I am proud to say I am an overly obsessed Eurovision fanatic despite my country coming dead last this year D: lol.

Aw thank you for reading :D ♥

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nicolochy June 3 2010, 02:17:45 UTC
Wow. I love watching Eurovision despite the fact that everything I know about it is from the internet (my country can't join, too far from Europe). Hehe.

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heartsickhealme June 4 2010, 17:28:11 UTC
Aw, thats a pity, I had always hoped the Eurovision would turn into a world-wide competition, I would love to see what countries like Korea could bring to it :D

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pandaunni June 3 2010, 00:49:03 UTC
D'AAAAWWWWW
that's so heartwarming <3
several grammatical errors but that's okay :)
It's sweet <3

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heartsickhealme June 4 2010, 17:26:30 UTC
Thank you :)

I know I must admit I was pretty sleep deprived while writing this lol. I have attempted to fix some of the grammar. :)

Thank you for reading :) ♥

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