"Kibum missed Kevin, no doubt about it.
'Tell me everything, I want to know the whole story, and do not miss anything out!' Kibum heard an all too familiar voice whisper in his ear. Looking up, there stood a sight possibly more beautiful than spring, Kevin".
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Your a traitor how can you promise me forever then just leave me like this? is what Kevin whispered back, voice breaking as a result of all the screeching.
I love this <3 My heart broke but I'm probably a sadist so I love this. It's so beautiful to say it like this :D
Aw Kevin! /cuddles
Obviously. I was even shocked someone could name this feeling of attraction "Love", more so if someone could describe the feeling of losing.
Kibum! Kevin didn't move on!
You guys love each other so much, you should put some faith in Kevin <33
And although there's no one to deny Kevin's beauty <33, I love the way you wrote it. Instead of plain beautiful or describing his skin and all,
Looking up, there stood a sight possibly more beautiful than spring, Kevin.
This is just marvelous :D
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Thank you so much :)
Yeah, I wanted to show two sides to Kevin, the emotional side and the forgiving side :)
Originally, I had decided that nothing can comapre to Kevin's beauty, but spring is too beautiful to not be used as a comparison ♥
Thank you so much for reading and enjoying :) ♥
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No problem :)
Haha, normally two sides to a person is an angel and a devil. For Kevin it's only emotional and forgiving XD
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Thank you for reading :D
You are the awesome one. ♥
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Secondly. I am just about finished reading your "Books & Noise" fic and...wow.
I think your writing is just beautiful. ♥
Just write from your heart, it can't go wrong ;-)
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Thanks for reading ♥
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It's cute! I guess when Kibum promised forever, Kevin promised through thick and thin.
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Aw thank you for reading :D ♥
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that's so heartwarming <3
several grammatical errors but that's okay :)
It's sweet <3
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I know I must admit I was pretty sleep deprived while writing this lol. I have attempted to fix some of the grammar. :)
Thank you for reading :) ♥
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