Broken barriers|OnKey|PG-13|Part 1

[heartsickhealme]

"As the days pass the sneaking out becomes more frequent.
They hide wherever they can, closets, under beds, under tables, bathrooms.
Sometimes they can only be together for around 5 minutes so they make it last"

Comments

[novocainex]

:( This made me sad. But I think the story's really quite beautiful. It's like Icould almost feel their pain, y'know?
/sniff
I look forward to the next part-fingers crossed for a happy ending!
Tbh, I don't want them to run away from home...but at the same time, I feel like they deserve to be happy amd with each other. D: Soperplexing.
Anyway...I loved it. :) <3

[heartsickhealme]

Aw, I'm sorry it made you sad bb (:

I'm writing the next part now <3

Thank you for reading (even though it was such a depressing fic) &hearts

[novocainex]

:( It's okay. *sniffles*
OHYAY. 8D /waits (im)patiently.

I love depressing fics, dear. :') <345678910

[heartsickhealme]

Lol, funnily enough so do I, an angsty fic can't go wrong :P

[volatileflame]

aww~ : (
but this was lovely, and i can't wait for the next one : )

[heartsickhealme]

I'm writing part two now (: ♥

Thanks for reading <3

[ttwyaopbtoyatw]

what's the homo situation?
btw lovely fi, i think they shuld.....aggh! i don't know.
but if they really love each other, nothing-poverty(they willget thrown out) nor hatred will stop them.
they will get to know their true friends and fans.
as simple as that.

[heartsickhealme]

In South Korea, same-sex dating is frowned upon...

Thanks for reading (: <3

[owlbee]

i loved it! but ;_____;
this is so sad.. :(
ahh...cant wait for the next part!
<3~

[heartsickhealme]

Thank you (:

I'm writing part two now (:

Thanks for reading <3

[rinni1905]

It makes me sad that this is 2010 and still sexual orientation still a bitch when you find out that you are different from others. Human has the right to love, and I don't think it's right for South Korea and some contries to forbid it. I think most people will be more open-minded, but it seems that we tried to erase the past, when homosexual was still considered normal in Asian soceity and culture.

Jinki should be strong for Kibum because Kibum needed him, and seeing him crying like that was a little unbearable. It was hard to be an idol, and I hope they could find their way to archieve their rightful happyness.

This fic is written beautifully, please update soon :).

[heartsickhealme]

I totally agree, they treat homosexuals like murderers, it makes me sick knowing people have to live fake lives just to be accepted in this world.

I'm really glad you understand the story, I was unsure about posting it incase someone took it as an offence, but I think it's real, I think there may be idols out there living fake lives to protect themselves.

Thank you so much for reading, I'm writing part two now (: <3