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Jul 14, 2010 15:36

Do you remember? ♥
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dubujoo July 14 2010, 20:03:06 UTC
DONGSAENGIE :DD <33 *huggles*
Must say, I really love to read and write poetry and this... was amazingly adorable! All the memories inside each line was enough to make me go aww or just squeal like crazy x) Everything was sweet~

Remember when I called you my baby and the fans in the crowd went crazy?
I really really liked this line! Probably because it's true and I'm the type of fan that would scream like crazy... >__< Cannot resist Onkey and their cuteness together!

Well, I cannot wait for your kpop star leader comedy diary fics! I simply love most of the kpop leaders! Especially Onew and Doojoon!! :DD So I am very very excited to read it dongsaengie~~ <33
Thanks for sharing this lovely poem! Have a nice day dear~ :)) <33

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dubujoo July 14 2010, 20:03:28 UTC
Might I add that...
I AM FIRST KEKE :DD

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heartsickhealme July 15 2010, 13:51:19 UTC
HELLO <3

I am so so so so so x 100 glad you liked it, this is my first try at poetry (:

Hehe, the first series of the fic will start on Friday, I cannot wait for you to read it !

-I shall save you a spot on Friday when I post it ♥-

You are extremely welcome, thank you so much for reading it (:
And have a nice day/night too ♥

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dubujoo July 16 2010, 02:09:26 UTC
ZOMG!! :DD You're going to give me a spot?!?! *jumps around* You just made my day dongsaengie~ <33 Thank you for giving me a spot! Cannot wait to read it tmr!

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volatileflame July 14 2010, 23:14:37 UTC
awwwww~ this was adorable and sweet X3

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heartsickhealme July 15 2010, 13:51:56 UTC
Thanks for reading (: ♥

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rinni1905 July 15 2010, 02:15:49 UTC
Aw, I just want to squish you for writing this. Just a short poem but it's so touching. And I love the "remember" words, it sounds so far but still near, warm and heart-touching, and so loving. That's why I love all the "remember" word in every language, it sounds lovely to my ears. And you know, it's wonderful to hear it from your beloved's lip. I guess you'll know it when you turned 25 or so, not that I turned 25. XP

Remember when you whispered 'till the end'?. I love this line, though I don't believe in forever or the end, but love can always prove the opposite, right? And how wonderful it is to hear that no matter what happened, they are still by your side. It's really sweet and cute. :)

Thanks for writing this, I love this poem and I love you too.... ^^

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heartsickhealme July 15 2010, 13:56:03 UTC
Lol, squish away (:

Hehe, me neither, I don't turn 25 for quite a few years but I totally get what your saying, I hope Onew and Key will be as close as they are now, when they reach 25 (or 45 :P)

You are most welcome, thank you for reading and enjoying it, and of course, I love you and your lovely comment too (: ♥

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boogie14 July 15 2010, 03:16:01 UTC
AWWWWW!!!!
This was like soo soo sweet! >3<
I love poetry and this was amazingly written
every line, evert little memory, so beutiful and touching!! ;u;

OH! OH! and about that fanfic you'll write! can't wait till you uplod it!! >U<
i so want to read it!! especially Onew's ! sorry, too biased
i also want to read the others, but Jinki's priority! eue)/
totally memming it!

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heartsickhealme July 15 2010, 14:00:05 UTC
Thank you. Seriously, I was so unsure about posting it, poetry isn't my strong point but to know that you enjoyed makes me happy (:

Hehe, the first series of the fic will be posted on Friday, I shall save you a spot (:

Thanks again for reading bb ♥

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boogie14 July 15 2010, 22:58:01 UTC
OMO! really?' spot for me??
Thank youu -huggles-

you're very welcomed! (;

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luv4yen July 15 2010, 03:43:57 UTC
OMO!!! This was absolutely sweet XD its like you can really feel the love between them :] ! I love it!!

Thanks for sharing ^^

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heartsickhealme July 15 2010, 14:00:45 UTC
Aw, thank you so much for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it ♥

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