Between Sand and Sea - Chapter 3/?

[heartsyuu]

Title: Between Sand and Sea
Chapters: 3/?
Author: heartsyuu 
Genre: AU, Fantasy
Warnings: None right now
Rating: G
Pairings/Characters: Aoi, Uruha, Ruki, Reita, Hotaru(OC), Kai/Kanon Wakeshima (side)
Disclaimer: Gotta catch 'em a-- *shot* No I don't own them, sorry
Synopsis: "That's the thing, Kai. I'm a merman, a gay merman."
Comments: I'm back with another fic

Comments

[calmingcalamity]

So I just found the story, and I'm really liking it ^^ I hope there's more Aoi soon~

Uru would make a cute merman. Although I'm sort of confused as to what their tails are supposed to look like...two seaweeds grown by each other? O_O That seems hard to swim with...

[heartsyuu]

Oh, Aoi will come in the next chapter (hopefully if I can write it out properly >__> LOL)

Erm, when I was trying to describe the tails, I was mostly describing the very ends of the tail using things from the ocean (because this chapter is written in Uruha's point of view, and he doesn't really know things about land and stuff) like...like.

http://www.lovefishing.com.au/uploads_user/1000/4/1355.jpg

Here's a diagram you can refer to. The one that's described as "Two seaweeds grown by each other" is supposed to look like B. The one that's supposed to be the crescent moon is sort of like A. :D And Kai's tail is from my imagination. I hope that helps~

Thanks for reading and commenting! ^___^

[calmingcalamity]

Ohhh I thought you meant the whole tail and I was like O_O Odd image of two giant seaweeds stuck on some poor mermaid/merman's torso XD

[plastic_liqueur]

Uruha is a prince, that's adorable <3
I'm so happy that Kai is happy since he deserves to be happy because he can make others so happy with his smile. Wow so much happiness in one sentence!

I can't wait for Aoi seeing Uruha~~ And it's so cute when the fish try to wake him up. I'd love to experience something like that myself!

[heartsyuu]

Technically if Uruha had married a mermaid he would be the king but yeahh~ Kanon's older and she got married first xD

Yes, yes, I made Kai uber happy because, well, intentionally it was in celebration that I got my braces off and now my teeth are free from that evil thing :D But Kai's smile is awesome too~ ^___^

Thanks for reading and commenting! :D

[lylark]

I finally caught up with this story! :DDD

Kai seems like the sweet and caring type, which I absolutely love. I can't wait until Aoi and Uruha meet again! :DDD

Keep up the good work, ne! <3

[heartsyuu]

Well I wanted Kai to reflect a nice character because, well, he kind of has to LOL Unfortunately he might not appear all that much in this series since Uruha is more important. Hee.
And I'm working ;___; I'm having so much trouble with the next chapter but hopefully I won't kill myself over it.

Thanks for reading!!

[heartsyuu]

Yeah I know it's kind of fuzzy at parts but, then again, I DO write fanfics at around 2AM LOL.

Yes it says they were friends when they were young, but I wanted to show the whole 'teenage love' between Kai and Kanon *snort* yeah I know. (I still think that being a teenager is young! D: )
And I think you mean...MERMAN. keke. Yeah I really need to proof read before I post >_>

[heartsyuu]

....Ocean school... LOL.
Everything's really sudden about them because they're not main characters so. Yeah. The scene is important.
...Chapter 4 D: