Just because...

Feb 16, 2010 14:41


This won't be continued. DO NOT ask me to continue it. It's kinda disjointed, unedited, unbeta'd, raw... random... against my moral being... whatever.

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He was beginning to regret his decision to not book the privacy suite. He’d insisted that such luxuries were unnecessary, that in the spirit of attempting to retain normalcy, business class was ( Read more... )

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runningxisxlife February 16 2010, 04:48:33 UTC
I think what I liked best about this was that not once did you mention their real names, but we knew exactly who they were. We didn't need a description of her hair or his eyes - we just knew. It was this air of love that threaded through each word. It was beautiful. Something so simple as flying back from the one and only Aussi, and you made it magical.

I loved it, it made my heart flutter for more reasons than you know. Thank you for writing this.

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heartunprepared February 16 2010, 05:15:53 UTC
Thank you. I feel a bit conflicted about writing it, even as short and tiny as it was, but nice things being said helps. :)

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metrocard February 16 2010, 05:05:29 UTC
This was so lovely and I loved it and IDK. I really, really loved it more than I can explain, I guess. It was simple, it wasn't filled with overtly romantic gestures or ridiculous moments that aren't realistic. It really was real, and for someone who doesn't write RPF and says she can't comprehend it, I think you wrote it beautifully, and IDK...I think it speaks to what an amazing fan you are, TBH. Shows that you understand and view their lives and life together realistically, which is something that is rare and wonderful. Basically, I loved it.

NOW FOR MY IMMATURITY.

GIRL YOU WROTE RPF LOLOLOL I LOVE YOU. <33333

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heartunprepared February 16 2010, 05:14:24 UTC
It spoke to me. I woke up yesterday and had news that they had arrived and the first thing I said when I arrived at Fan Forum was that someone had to write this and somewhere deep down I knew I wanted to do it. It called to me more than any moral high ground that I walk on. I could never write a 'full' story - I could never presume to put so many words into the mouth of someone real. But this moment spoke to me... even when the fates told me I wasn't meant to write it (literally as I was writing this was when my laptop went crazy) I ignored them.

Glad you liked it. It'd be awful to compromise myself and be told it was shit. LOL.

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glimmeringworld February 16 2010, 06:03:03 UTC
Sighs contently.... there are no words. The raw, unbetaed, unedited, disjointedness makes it exactly what it is... a moment in time captured to show that it is about love nothing else. We know who it is, but you can make it whoever you want...

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ohmygawd_eww February 16 2010, 07:28:49 UTC
That was perfection. V day doesn't have to mean grand gestures, or flashy gifts. Just being together is enough.

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zacvanessaxxx February 16 2010, 07:36:55 UTC
Even though you may think it's not fantastic - I LOVED IT! It was so raw and it went so well with probably how they were feeling. I was sooo shocked when I found out he was in my country - and felt angry I was in Brisbane and not in Sydney but the photos and news reports plus this short story will have to fill my void.

nicely done!

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