In Packages

Jan 24, 2013 02:35

Title: In Packages
Author: shangrilada (Kira)
Summary: Christa and Dean are living together, and it's time for him to learn some stuff.
Word Count: 2,837
Author's Note: I wanted to do another Christa POV, perhaps only because I like my icon so much, but also because this is a story idea I wanted to work out for a while and I'm glad I got it finished, whether ( Read more... )

author: kira, point of view: christa

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leah_elisabeth January 24 2013, 07:51:20 UTC
That last sentence...breathtaking. Awwwwww, so cute. Dean is such a great guy. I may have to just wallow in the schmoop for a while. He really needs to be a dad.

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heartverse January 24 2013, 08:01:53 UTC
thank you! i do write a very domestic dean, haha.

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iamthepasserby January 24 2013, 13:37:38 UTC
god i just loved this.

dean asking 'can i be black?' is kind of the best thing.

and then there's "One time a car fell on him."

um.

GIMME THAT FIC. LIKE NOW. LIKE WHOA. PLEASE. PRETTY PLEASE WITH A CAR ON TOP (lol, see? see what i did there? im so clever, guys)

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heartverse January 24 2013, 16:51:38 UTC
YOU WILL GET IT

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heartverse January 24 2013, 17:20:44 UTC
who's writing that, you or me?

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heartverse January 24 2013, 17:26:50 UTC
i want to say you but i can see it both ways (obviously).

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drcharleseppes January 24 2013, 14:50:22 UTC
God, I love this. All of these things we've been thinking about in the back of our heads about a black chick dating a white guy with a black kid in the mix just spilled out, and it was everything we were thinking.

In some ways, Christa feels like the New Jess. Not that they are alike personality-wise; I... huh. Not sure how to explain it, and I hope you get what I mean. At any rate, I love it.

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heartverse January 24 2013, 16:53:33 UTC
thank you so much! there's a lot of jess in this verse as well, i'll be psyched to get to her when the time is right.

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quickreaver January 25 2013, 01:22:15 UTC
This feels so real and tough and sweet. You two are doing such a bang up job of broaching really touchy subjects with wit and frankness. You've re-spun the characters into very different creatures and it totally works. I can hear their voices clearly. Fabulous job!

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heartverse January 25 2013, 01:35:25 UTC
thank you, wow, what a compliment. thank you so much.

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