1. The door either hit your shoulder or did not hit your shoulder. It is impossible for the door to "like" hit your shoulder. 2. Regarding your use of "totally", there is no need to use this. It is extraneous. 3. "Well anyhow it totally knocked me off my feet and I totally fell hitting my hands and knees real hard on the ground plus the blow to the jaw made the lights dim, and made me bite the inside of my cheek making blood ooze out of my mouth kinda like that Andrew W K picture except it was my mouth not my nose." This is a textbook example of a run-on sentence.
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2. Regarding your use of "totally", there is no need to use this. It is extraneous.
3. "Well anyhow it totally knocked me off my feet and I totally fell hitting my hands and knees real hard on the ground plus the blow to the jaw made the lights dim, and made me bite the inside of my cheek making blood ooze out of my mouth kinda like that Andrew W K picture except it was my mouth not my nose." This is a textbook example of a run-on sentence.
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oh, by the way....homer's been known to grab the ass!!!!
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