Comments | heath_barkley: 68.1.C. “We’ve the rest of time to find out, haven’t we?”/writers muses

heath_barkley

68.1.C. “We’ve the rest of time to find out, haven’t we?”/writers muses

Dec 26, 2008 14:18

Victoria Barkley could not have been happier even though, for the last week, the house had been in a complete upheaval. For the first Christmas in several years, she'd had all of her children home. All of her children, the thought brought a smile to her face, and for not the first time. If someone had told her a year ago that she would learn that ( Read more... )

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Victoria's POV moira4eku January 6 2009, 20:12:42 UTC

I've really enjoyed your POV of Victoria. Victoria really wants to get to know Heath here in the early years. I found it quite interesting in your time line, you have Heath and Audra near the same age instead of a 5 years difference as in the series. So is Heath nearer to 19 or Audra nearer to 24? I imagine it is really hard for Heath at this time since this is his first Christmas without his mother, and still not quite accepted by Heath. I hope you'll continue on with this part of Heath's life for a bit. I'm really enjoy reading these shorts.

Re: Victoria's POV heath_barkley January 6 2009, 22:07:42 UTC

Thank you for the feedback. In all honesty, I wasn't aware that there was anything saying there was a 5 year gap between Heath and Audra, Heath and Eugene, maybe. I see Audra as more his age, and am writing him at around 24.

I've just committed myself to a challenge community with a 100 fic committment, so, hopefully you'll keep reading.

Thanks, again for the imput.

Re: Victoria's POV moira4eku January 8 2009, 07:11:29 UTC

In the first season Audra has a birthday party (the one with the evil Evan!), called "My Son, My Son". She turned 19 years old in that one. Heath is 24 in POG. Or he could be 23, I've always wondered when Jarrod asks Heath during the confrontation how long ago was that, was he referring to Leah and Tom's affair or when Heath was born? Hope you plan on writing more!

that was good observation anonymous January 10 2009, 22:11:34 UTC

I thought they were pretty darn close in age since Heath became closest to Audra, but that also could do with the fact she was more accepting of him, as his brothers were not.