The Beginning Of An End- Chris/Ezra- 3/5

[heathenseyes]

Title: The Beginning Of An End
Pairings: Chris/Ezra
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Angst is ahead. Consider yourself warned, there was a request for the fic to have no humor and this was the muses response because she loves to make people suffer and strangely enough that really applies to her visioning of poor Ezra. And sorry for any mistakes, they are all

Comments

[sivanshemesh]

That was sweet, though about the rate of the chapter i'm not so sure.

Love the angst, and waiting to read more of it.

Thank you for writing it, keep writing,

*Hugs*

Sivan Shemesh

[sfulton229]

Ezra is trying so hard to handle this and Chris' actions aren't letting him. Having Ezra be so confused and sad really fits and Chris is trying to figure out what to do-keep Ezra safe but not let him get close. Ezra can't hide it from Maude and she isn't in the right mood to give him advice; she is a master at avoiding entanglements and she is worried about what is going on with Ezra. The next time that Chris and Ezra make love is so different; I'm looking forward to the fallout from this time. Thanks for posting this and please post the next part soon.

[heathenseyes]

Yes, we are coming to the really angsty parts, which, given the last couple of chapters is really saying something. :)

Happy you liked!!! *hugs*

[tpena19]

Nice addition. Really liked the emotions felt throughout. And, OMG perfect lines! "Nonetheless he was going to remain positive. Positive that he was screwed." too awesome. Also LOVE "He couldn’t figure it out. The man seemed to hate him, and yet it was as though he couldn’t stop caring, and it was tearing Ezra apart. Bit by bit." great view into Chris' character.

A few errors: "Every time he though[t] he could look at Chris" , "depression deeper than [t]he one" , "in his line of [work] that" , "people he had ever [met]" , "read his little [tells]" , "the grim line [of] her mouth or [smooth] away" , "illuminating the [deleted] color to a honeyed gold as it raced [past] the house, and Ezra cursed." , "he had [to] grip" , "than have to suffer through [it]." , "touch[.]"

Oooh

[evildrem]

Just read the first 3 chapters and I'm very intrigued. Ezra and Chris are being their usual bone headed selves I see. I like you Exra voice, its suitably sharp and self deprecating. Look forward to reading more :)