I come bearing fic!

Feb 24, 2011 01:04

title: We Used to Wait (I)
fandom: Parks and Recreation
pairing: Ben/Leslie
rating: around PG
words: 4,500
disclaimer: I only wish I could claim ownership for this perfect show, but alas.
summary: Post-Harvest Festival, a few days prior to Ben's departure, and a birthday on the horizon.

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Ben can feel their eyes burning into the back of his head and he ( Read more... )

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jessobsess February 24 2011, 01:37:06 UTC
UM HI THIS IS JESS. AKA MISS-FITTZ ON TUMBLR.

And I left an actual semi-coherent comment in your ask box. Actually it was not at all coherent, but it was longer. I just have to say here that: BEN IS SUCH A GENTLEMAN IN THIS AND IT JUST ASPLODES MY OVARIES ALL OVER THE PLACE OKAY.

<333

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menzjj815 February 24 2011, 01:59:29 UTC
OMGGGG I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART!!!

this was so in character, and not just for Ben and Leslie, but for everyone (especially Tom!!) and I was laughing throughout (at the humorous parts of course!). you captured BL's relationship perfectly and their feelings. It makes total sense that Leslie would be confused by Ben and how she feels about him and of course we all know that Ben is one smitten kitten.

you are really amazing at this, so I hope you continue writing more after you are done with this fic. I tried to take breaks throughout reading this so as to savor it. I didn't want it to end!!

I think my favorite part was, “Oh god, stop it please,” he mutters. The mere idea of trying to scoop her out of the seat is almost too much for him to bear.
it literally made me want to die in a good way. I got the butterflies in my stomach *sigh*

oh btw, this is human-disaster on tumblr ;)

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fairytiger February 26 2011, 19:24:32 UTC
Okay, I thought I'd devoured every single piece of Ben/Leslie fic out there, but then I found THIS! Oh my goodness, this. It's sweet and wonderful and perfect and I really really cannot wait for the next part!

Following your tumblr (I'm sergiovalente) and reading this fic were two very good decisions :) Can't wait for part two!

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pulsetone March 2 2011, 21:41:47 UTC
There is more right? What did she make him? Please more?

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calikatie91 March 21 2011, 16:38:59 UTC
omg, Heath. I don't even know what to say. I have been reading a lot of Ben/Leslie fic lately, and I think this is my favorite. (And I've yet to read the second and third parts!) Your use of adjectives and similes just really adds great imagery to this story! You have everyone in perfect character. I can literally imagine this as an actual episode! Ahh, basically, I can't wait to read more. Ben is just the cutest, most perfect gentleman ever, and that's portrayed perfectly in this story. Well done!

(BTW, this is Katie (withyoutotheend) from Tumblr! :D )

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