The Decagon - part 2

[heaven_smile]

I had originally written this piece for largeprimenumbers.com, but it wasn't meant to be. I present you with part one of my Winter Dreams Trilogy. I never finished the third part, and I don't think I'll be posting the second part in The Decagon. I'm still not sure if I like it.

Winter Dreams
Part 1: the generator
A piece by Evan KaigleI hate

Comments

[julianseastar]

Ah. Lovely. I'm almost speechless. That's a very nice piece of writing.

Okay, what is it that I like so much? Lemme see - it's the fluidity of time, and the uneasy truce between stream of consciousness and self editing. Among other things.