[VF] Inevitable Outcome Chap 1

[heavengel]

Alrighto!! My first attempt at VF fic...-_-..as usual..hard..easy to imagine with jumping images in my mind but sheesh..writing them is another story altogether. Nevertheless, I am determined *drum roll..anime style*..sigh..nm..it's like 4 AM now..so here goes...totally un-betaed.

Title: Inevitable Outcome

Chapter: 1

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Comments

[sunflower1343]

This is really interesting. You did a great job and have left me wanting more. I liked the way Asami's interested went from zero to 60 over the course of the evening.^^ (and I know it's weird, but I'm glad she is a he LOL) I don't usually like him playing with OCs, but I like this a lot. Are you going to post it to the comm's? You should.

[heavengel]

Thank you thank you!!...Huehue...yah I usually dun reallie like OCs also.hauahu but I can't help writing this one. Thank you for the encouragement tho! I would wait til I got a bit more but I will definitely post it. Arigato!!!

[kawaiigato]

Yay, you started writing it! *very happy*

This OC seems quite an interesting girl boy. What in the world does he have up his sleeve? ^_^; Will this one be an only-Asami story, or will you incorporate the other characters as well? *being nooooosey* "Innocent eyes", hehe...good luck, Asami!
And I agree. You should post this on our comms at well. Or wait until you get a bit more out, and then go for it.

*hugs* Thank you!

[heavengel]

Yay!! I managed to post sth!! heuheu...it's so hard to start..I was doing like 3 sentences a day, but somehow everything starts to flow yesterdae. As for more characters....hmm..yes I am planning on doing that without making them too cliche..hehe.we'll see..I hope I get to surprise myself ^^!! hehee...I will try to post this once I get sth more substantial together. Arigato Gozaimasta for reading and encouraging!