Comments | heavengel: [VF]Inevitable Outcome Chap 3

heavengel

[VF]Inevitable Outcome Chap 3

Mar 21, 2006 10:17

I think the smuts deserved a Chapter on its own *evil grin*, so I am going to leave that fun out for now :D:D:D

Title: Inevitable Outcome

Chapter: 3 (The Ball)

Disclaimer: All belong to Yamane sensei...

( Chap 3 )

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Comments 17

fuyugurei March 23 2006, 15:21:01 UTC

That was really interesting. I'm sure Aki-chan looks very pretty. It's no wonder those three musketeers were trying to pick up him. I can't wait for more. ^____^

heavengel March 23 2006, 17:02:31 UTC

That one is inevitable eh. ^^! But it seemed to work well for him or not hehehe...thank you for reading ^^.

sirius_fasha March 23 2006, 16:42:35 UTC

huhuhu, can't wait for d next! but i still hav to wait *glomps*
it's definitely getting more interesting, at least for me, since im asami/takaba fan thru n thru.

heavengel March 23 2006, 17:05:42 UTC

HEhee.thank you for keeping up with this ^^. Appreciate your comment too. Oh, I am a hugggeee asamaXTakaba fant too *high five*, just hope I could write them fast enough.

sirius_fasha March 23 2006, 17:10:47 UTC

really?!!! wow this is great! yay! i saw CHap 4! *ran off to read*

thyorz March 27 2006, 01:48:48 UTC

This is story is so great! Can't wait to see what's going to happen.
and as for Takaba "adjusting his bra strap", man, I never imagine this line could be this funny, the mental picture really cracked me up. XD

Great job, please keep writing.

heavengel March 27 2006, 03:01:47 UTC

Thank you so much for reading ^^!. I really appreciate your comment too, glad you like it :D. Ok, now I can peacefully write Chap 5 XD.

kawaiigato March 27 2006, 20:18:52 UTC

I bet Asami must plan the time it takes to struggle with, subdue, and "coerce" Takaba to do what he wants. *coff* And I bet he had to plan for quite a lot of time to get him in that dress O_o Heh. But that's a very fun image. From last chapter, we know Akihito has pretty feet, so I bet he just looked so dainty in this princess outfit. *pets him* Thank you for the fun!

heavengel March 27 2006, 21:43:34 UTC

bUHauhuaa...hmmm...don't worry, I have asked Asami for permission to show how he (finally) made Takaba came dressed that way *I swear no pun intended*. hihihi....but he said I should only say it at the end of the story. Well, I am kinda weak when it comes to him and he was all smirky when he gave me the orders, so I could only nod -_-.

jamielle April 21 2006, 10:03:41 UTC

hahahah I would like to see aki in women clothes too it's quite funny to imagine. I know that you friend locked this story, could you please add me in your friends I really like your fics. Forgive me if I didn't let you commentaires before i'm new in this. Thanks

heavengel April 21 2006, 12:08:00 UTC

Hi hi ^^!! Thank you so much for reading XD. I would love to add you to my f-list, but would you mind leaving your birthyear and month here click me. Thank you XD.

I am sorry, I just can't resist teasing Aki. Besides, he does look good (that's what those 3 musketeers told me on the way out). *snicker2*