Beta for Chapter 6

Apr 09, 2006 17:34

Hey Minna-san ( Read more... )

Leave a comment

Comments 4

rajendora April 10 2006, 04:02:07 UTC
Sad to say I'm falling behind on my earlier offer. >< I hope someone speaks up. I can't concentrate too well for the next few days, but I do look forward to reading the full story over!

Reply

heavengel April 10 2006, 04:43:46 UTC
Lol. yah me hope so too. Otherwise I juz post the unbetaed version :(. I hope it ain't THAT bad. Lol. Well, i'll make it up with more smuts..how's tt?? hauhauhaua.....yah I'm lame. I know. *Spank Asami plushie's butt and then give it a huge smooocchhh. With Takaba tied to the chair watching me, of coz ^^!* Not that he minds eh, Aki-chan???

Reply

rajendora April 10 2006, 05:05:16 UTC
ROFL!

I'm about to head off to bed, but the best advice I've been given is let it rest for 24 hours, then go back over it three times, last time start at the last sentence and read backwards sentence by sentence. Of course, I never listen to my own advice.

Aki-chan askes if you can put Asami in a maid costume. *snickers*

Reply

heavengel April 10 2006, 05:23:51 UTC
Be very careful of what you ask for. *Rehearsed, hoarse evil laugh..then coughing terribly as soon as lagen turned around and saw Asami standing right behind her*...owke....gotta run.

Reply


Leave a comment

Up